Swoosh ! the leaves rustle
Glee glee glee ….the giggling stream
Brings a whiff of fresh , clear water
I sniff , I snort , the smell of leaves
I breathe in the flowers .
Splash ! I throw and
Plop ! they go
Pebbles and stones
Clack ! the twigs wince
Under my feet .
The bees buzz , the doves moan
The wind makes the wood babble
Rattling branches greet me
Merrily , I enjoy the gabble.
Onomatopoeia is a figure of speech which describes sounding words i.e formation of words which imitate natural sounds .
To know more see ONOMATOPOEIA
Written very well…esp.the flow is too good to read 🙂
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I simply loved it. I love using sound effects as words but we stick to pretty basics. Too too too good.
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Beautiful! With all those glee, splash,plop sounds, it makes me to read it again and again.
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Lovely One
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Loved the mild excitement in the lines. 🙂
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Nice to know that Indrani..Thank you 🙂
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I listened to your poem this time..the sounds were alluring…:)
Lovely..:)
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whao .. how beautifully all those exclamatory words are used .. lovely 🙂
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Nice usage of words… lovely post dear!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Mention not 🙂 🙂
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nice 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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nice…i love sound words…our world is full of noise…and so should be our poems….smiles.
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Glad to know that Brian.. 🙂 thank you
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