Beautiful poem(this has become stale(my comment) as all your poems I have read are lovely!!
“We poor souls, the water, wind & waves, try hard to get the boats through safely. Alas, but at times, when a boat wants to drown itself, we just facilitate!!”
Beautiful poetry…the picture and the words! Couldn’t help humming that song “Door hai kinaara…gehri nadi ki dhara…khete jao re maajhi”
“Jeet hai usi ki jisne maani nahi haar…maajhi”
Better stop before l write the full song 🙂
There is much symbolism in this, Maniparna. I see the possibility of times in our lives being “lost at sea.” I also saw Sue Dreammaker and how she mentioned migrating souls not always making it to shore. So many meanings found in your beautiful words expressed. 🙂
My pleasure .. Just wish I had more time to catch up with more since my holiday.. But I loved every post I visited today.. Thank you Maniparna.. xxx ❤ enjoy your weekend
Deep and profound. Once again the Vedic concept of Neti Neti. Although desolation reigns, but not all is lost. There’s still some hope! Eternal optimism.
A very beautiful and inspiring poem, as always, Maniparna!
Profound thought!
That is what life is…all are not successful, all desires are not fulfilled, many endeavours are wasted…still it goes on, we still have to smile and cruise along.
Beautiful poem(this has become stale(my comment) as all your poems I have read are lovely!!
“We poor souls, the water, wind & waves, try hard to get the boats through safely. Alas, but at times, when a boat wants to drown itself, we just facilitate!!”
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That’s a wonderful quote. Profound!
And, thanks again… 🙂
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ah..thanx(for the quote) and my pleasure(for your thanx)….
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🙂 …….
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Beautiful poem. Yet I’d like to believe if we allow the boat to go freely with the flow it surely will reach its destination. 😀
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I wish so,too. 🙂 Thank you so much…
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👍🏽 cheers to that!
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Cheers!
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Nicely written Maniparna. Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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A boat. A lake. Good poetry! A piece of art, Maniparna 🙂
P.S. Have you changed your header image? Love it
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Thanks, dear Prajakta. The header has two images …they keep on changing automatically…. 🙂
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Beautiful poetry…the picture and the words! Couldn’t help humming that song “Door hai kinaara…gehri nadi ki dhara…khete jao re maajhi”
“Jeet hai usi ki jisne maani nahi haar…maajhi”
Better stop before l write the full song 🙂
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Thank you…glad that the words reminded you this beautiful song… 🙂
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beautiful 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thanks. dear… ❤
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Poignant as many above have said.
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Thanks and welcome to my virtual abode… 🙂
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Mmmmmm.. Sad!
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It is…
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There is much symbolism in this, Maniparna. I see the possibility of times in our lives being “lost at sea.” I also saw Sue Dreammaker and how she mentioned migrating souls not always making it to shore. So many meanings found in your beautiful words expressed. 🙂
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I’m glad that you found it symbolic and impregnated with deep meanings. It’s the flow, the rule of life..isn’t it? The inevitable…. 🙂
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A beautiful photo with a poignant message.. as I think of those fleeing their home lands in seeking sanctuary .. xxx
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Thanks for the wonderful comment, dear Sue… 🙂
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My pleasure .. Just wish I had more time to catch up with more since my holiday.. But I loved every post I visited today.. Thank you Maniparna.. xxx ❤ enjoy your weekend
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Thanks…you, too, have a great weekend.. 🙂
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Wonderful words dear friend. It’s true, not all boats are meant to reach on the shore. Your work is amazing as always.
Cheers!
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Thank you, Anoop… you always have good words for me… 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thanks, Rupam… 🙂
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“…not always, some boats come to shore!”
Deep and profound. Once again the Vedic concept of Neti Neti. Although desolation reigns, but not all is lost. There’s still some hope! Eternal optimism.
A very beautiful and inspiring poem, as always, Maniparna!
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Thanks loads for getting the essence! 🙂
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Very thoughtful. Lovely poem Maniparna.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Lovely poem, Maniparna. Very profound. It reminds me of the song: “Nadiya chale chale re dhara tujhko chalna hoga…..”
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All of us have numerous aspirations, desires, and wishes. A few of them come true, but life goes on… the song is so apt…thanks, Ravish… 🙂
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Dark but true..
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Yes…harsh truth…
Thank you, Nitin… 🙂
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you’re welcome Maniparna 🙂
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profound thought. good one 🙂
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Thanks, Meera… 🙂
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Depth of life in life … Amazing
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Thank you…glad you liked… 🙂
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Poignant. It evokes a sad image (about the lost boats). Well-penned, Maniparna.
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Harsh truth of life, sad indeed..:-(
Thank you, Kiran…
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Quite thoughtful!
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Glad you thought so… 🙂
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The last line aptly describes it all. 🙂 Nice one.. 🙂
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Thanks, Prakash… 🙂
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Superbly told. You painted a powerful imagery of existence:)
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Thank you, Vishal… 🙂
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You create images from words and it is high time that we are treated to a book of such words and thoughts.
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Oh! Thank you! A book…yes…thinking of it but I’m a very laid back person…so..:-P
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Being laid back means you will take your time and not release it until you are happy, it’s a good trait and to see you published would be brilliant!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful words !!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Profound thought!
That is what life is…all are not successful, all desires are not fulfilled, many endeavours are wasted…still it goes on, we still have to smile and cruise along.
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Exactly so! Balroop… that was the intended meaning… 🙂 Thank you so much… 🙂
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Love the message in this one, Somali. The seas are always rougjt but for the strong ones, well persevere and get there 🙂
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Thanks, Mabel…but I’m Maniparna… 😀
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Ugh…sorry for the mistake, Mani. I was tired 😀 I am sure I got your name right in my latest comment just now 😀
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Hehe..I got it. Please don’t say sorry. I just wanted to pull your legs a little… 😀
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Very true every boat must return home. Very well said love the beautiful picture
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Thank you, Sara… 🙂
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Nicely done
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Thank you… 🙂
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🙂
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Pithy! 🙂
Love your poetry.
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Thanks, Georgia… 🙂
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Very beautiful pic!
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Thanks…welcome to my blog…. 🙂
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Nice poem!
কেউ যায় হারিয়ে
কোথাও হয় ভরাডুবি
তটে বসে একান্তে
আমি সেই কথা ভাবি।
🙂
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খুব সুন্দর… Why don’t you start a Bengali blog? Please think about it… 🙂
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ধন্যবাদ! হয়তো কখনো ভবিষ্যতে … I will keep your suggestion in mind. 🙂
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অপেক্ষায় থাকবো। WP বেশ কয়েকটা কমেন্ট স্প্যাম করে দিয়েছিল… কেন জানিনা 😦 রিভাইভ করলাম আজকে সব। উত্তর দিতে দেরি হল তাই…
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Loved it…
Every line,
Awesome…..
Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thanks for the good words… 🙂
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You are welcome:)
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🙂 …
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Just tc..
BTW, belated Happy mother’s day !
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That’s so nice of you…thanks once again… 🙂
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You are welcome, as anyways!
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so short yet so true! p.s the picture is lovely!
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Thank you, Mandira… 🙂
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Always lovely!
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Thankss… ! 🙂
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Some get lost midway? It gets me thinking if that is the meaning implied.
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Some dreams, aspiration, wishes are lost midway… all of them are not fulfilled, still, life goes on… 🙂
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That is a very beautiful thought. Life is like the river and dreams are the boats. Lovely. 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂
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