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deep the water is 

waves and wind shaking around
still they move on, but
not always
every boat comes to shore



93 responses to “Life

  1. Beautiful poem(this has become stale(my comment) as all your poems I have read are lovely!!
    “We poor souls, the water, wind & waves, try hard to get the boats through safely. Alas, but at times, when a boat wants to drown itself, we just facilitate!!”

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  2. Beautiful poetry…the picture and the words! Couldn’t help humming that song “Door hai kinaara…gehri nadi ki dhara…khete jao re maajhi”
    “Jeet hai usi ki jisne maani nahi haar…maajhi”
    Better stop before l write the full song 🙂

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  3. There is much symbolism in this, Maniparna. I see the possibility of times in our lives being “lost at sea.” I also saw Sue Dreammaker and how she mentioned migrating souls not always making it to shore. So many meanings found in your beautiful words expressed. 🙂

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  4. “…not always, some boats come to shore!”

    Deep and profound. Once again the Vedic concept of Neti Neti. Although desolation reigns, but not all is lost. There’s still some hope! Eternal optimism.

    A very beautiful and inspiring poem, as always, Maniparna!

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  5. Profound thought!
    That is what life is…all are not successful, all desires are not fulfilled, many endeavours are wasted…still it goes on, we still have to smile and cruise along.


  6. Nice poem!
    কেউ যায় হারিয়ে
    কোথাও হয় ভরাডুবি
    তটে বসে একান্তে
    আমি সেই কথা ভাবি।


      • ধন্যবাদ! হয়তো কখনো ভবিষ্যতে … I will keep your suggestion in mind. 🙂


      • অপেক্ষায় থাকবো। WP বেশ কয়েকটা কমেন্ট স্প্যাম করে দিয়েছিল… কেন জানিনা 😦 রিভাইভ করলাম আজকে সব। উত্তর দিতে দেরি হল তাই…

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