Standing alone on the meandering country road
She watched the sun slipping down, soft, crimson egg yolk.
Demure charm of the setting sun, hiding itself in the veil
Of evening. Darkness dillydallying to settle down.
Soft, dreamy light caressed the earth for the final time.
She embraced the murmuring silence of the idyllic night.
Shared with Poetry Pantry of Poets United
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lines are as charming as the photo, great
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This is really lovely 🙂 Like a sheet of satin caressing one’s skin… beautiful!
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Nice vivid expression, Mani 🙂
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Beautifully written ❤ ❤ ❤
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nice and cool green 🙂
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Beautiful lines going so well with the picture. Nice job.
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I love your Haikus dear! A beautiful one yet again! 🙂
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Awesome as always Maniparna 🙂
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Such a lyrical way to think about sunset and night!
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Superb !
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Awesome 🙂 And let the darkness arrive 😀 😀
Is that Darjeeling? 🙂
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Excellent portrayal… !! 🙂 A very few words..But you know your words…!!! Good writing…
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Beautiful Picture and place ❤
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Beautiful. Especially love this:
Standing alone on the meandering country road
She watched the sun slipping down, soft, crimson egg yolk.
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This is great. Love this scene.
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I could feel the day coming to a close, beautifully written.
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The vivid visual you presented with your words could never be equaled even by seeing the real thing. Wonderful! 🙂
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Thank you so much for the kind words of appreciation … 🙂
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A beautiful scene in which the rich green soothes your eyes and words that calm the nerves. Ths one is a beauty Maniparna.
Thanks aplenty 🙂
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Glad to know you liked it… 🙂 thanks for dropping by…
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the pic took my heart away! 🙂
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Such a soothing write, made me want to visit countryside to watch the sunset. It is hard to see one from my place due to all the tall buildings.. sigh!
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that was more of a lovely poetry in prose 🙂
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Awesome beautiful ! loved the egg yolk , the dillydallying darkness … and the soft light caressing the earth one final time…with the dillydallying darkness, the caress of light seemed reluctant yet intense …… loved it for fresh ‘prateeks’ or ‘ Bimbs’ the word dillydallying has lifted it from being a simple and beautiful verse to another level of personification ..
Kudos dear friend ! 🙂
Dil garden garden ho gaya ….
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Beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it 💖🌹
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I found it so calming I read it twice.
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This poem is perfectly imbued with the serenity and beauty of sundown. Love the idea of the sun as a crimson egg yolk!!!
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What a lovely scene you have set in this poem. It makes me relax just by reading it!
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This displays a light but lovely descriptive touch – a sheer pleasure to read – thank you… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
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I think this is a type of night I would like to go into.. wonderfully painted in words
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wow – the beauty of the nature, the air, breathe is a richness!
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Serenity serenity serenity ❤❤❤
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beautifully tranquil…
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