Haiku is a Japanese poetic form traditionally consists of 3 lines and 17 syllables in the order of 5-7-5. There are many other aspects though..you can see here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
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Oh ! I don’t know Dolores how I should react on your comment….it made be sad but still happy that you’ve find such resemblance with your emotions and feelings through my words…
And this time the second line of your haiku is awesome.I don’t think anybody apart from christ can say i am leaving this earth since i have finished doing everything 🙂
Light in darkness and words of silence in expression, is what makes magic in moments of life and I can see both in the beautiful picture and these few words…
Excellent! I loved this one!
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Haunting description, eternal silence.
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Good one
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Ah, the beauty of your words! 🙂
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Loved it. Especially the unfinished note and eternal silence. Beautiful, Maniparna. 🙂
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Awesome one ..:) Sounds good. Thanks for sharing this.
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wonderful lines there Maniparna… loved all the three 🙂 Even death is an inspiration here 😉
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Good one Maniparna.
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Spooky.. It is indeed as if the soul is leaving the body.. Fab shot.. Rajesh
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This poem kinda reminds me of the last scene from the movie anand.. very touching 🙂
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Profound lines..
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Sometimes I wonder who will finish the unfinished note of my life?
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This is one of the best Haikus I have read in a long time!
Cheers,
Ankush.
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This is my favourite one from now on 🙂 Lovely death, end of a melody, only the beginning 😀
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Superb. What made you write that?
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Actually there was a prompt, ” Death-poem” from one of the haiku community….I composed the haiku on that prompt 🙂
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Hi, long time no see. So what is Haiku, forgive my ignorance. Do you come up with the theme too?
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Hi Sweety,
Haiku is a Japanese poetic form traditionally consists of 3 lines and 17 syllables in the order of 5-7-5. There are many other aspects though..you can see here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Thanks a lot for dropping by and really it feels nice to have comments from friends. 🙂
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Wow Maniparna what a wonderful Jisei you share here … very nice and that last line … just gorgeous …
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Thank you so much Kristijaan…great to know you like it… 🙂
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Wow. Love that.
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Thank you..and thanks for the tweet too… 🙂
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I love the haiku and I don’t think I’ve ever read any that strikes such a chord with my emotions as yours, Maniparna. Thank you.
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Thanks for dropping by Elizabeth… great to know that you find it in tune with your emotions… 🙂
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Perfect … love you metaphor of music in this haiku.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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U are so good at haiku … Can’t even imagine something on death 😔
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Thanks a lot dear… 🙂
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Brilliant! I always find haiku is super difficult to create, you made it so easy and beautiful to read too.
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Thanks Indah for your great words of appreciation… 🙂
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I like it! One that makes me feel as if written for my husband…. how I would feel at his passing.
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Oh ! I don’t know Dolores how I should react on your comment….it made be sad but still happy that you’ve find such resemblance with your emotions and feelings through my words…
Thanks so much for dropping by…
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And this time the second line of your haiku is awesome.I don’t think anybody apart from christ can say i am leaving this earth since i have finished doing everything 🙂
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Thanks ..great to know that you’ve liked it… 🙂
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Maniparna i forgot to say one thing.Anybody can judge from your childhood photo you were really active.So i hope your son too.
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Haha..yes , he is… 🙂
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Superb !
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Thanks re.. 🙂
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A note unfinished and the melody too. Nice one Maniparna 🙂
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Thanks so much Vidyashree .. 🙂
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Loved the ‘note unfinished’ … you have made quite beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much Kokila… 😀
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sounds of silence ❤
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Yes..they are more powerful than words… ❤ 🙂
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that was profound!
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Thank you… 🙂
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Very nice — the melody unfinished is a great metaphor for the life gone too soon.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Light in darkness and words of silence in expression, is what makes magic in moments of life and I can see both in the beautiful picture and these few words…
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Aww..that’s so nice of you Nihar…thanks a lot for the appreciation… 🙂
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This was indeed lovely…my pleasure!!!
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there are always a few notes in spoken for…
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Yes..always..
Thanks for dropping by… 🙂
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