24 responses to “Haiku : Grimace”

1. triumph of evil
   well painted with words
   future of children.

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   • Well said 🙂

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     • thanks

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2. Amazing! I loved this take on the prompt ~ very clever and powerful!

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   • Thanks a lot 🙂

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3. Arouses scary feelings. Nice!

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4. This one is rich with darkness. Good one.

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   • Thank you 🙂

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5. Oh, but evil will not triumph, never!

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   • Lets pray for it..

     Thanks for dropping by 🙂

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6. nicely done 🙂 good imagery…here’s my take:
   http://apurvakj.wordpress.com/2014/01/13/grimace-haiku/

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7. A bit on the darker side.. and Well written as a haiku…it does offer scary visual..

   RS:)

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   • Yes..the world is dark today..isn’t it ?..

     Thanks a lot for dropping by.. 🙂

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8. Reads as if it is related to some present scenario.

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   • yes..absolutely.. you got it right 🙂

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9. good one 🙂

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10. Thanks 😀

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11. Ouch, that’s a scary thought – well written!

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    • haha ..thanks

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12. good one

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    • Thanks 🙂

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13. Very nice 🙂

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14. Followed by the evil laugh hoohahaha 🙂

    Lovely!

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15. ahh! gd one

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