There’s a pain with every falling leaf With every flower, a dream is lost The agony of parting, eyes of trees. Cloak of foliage, young and green Leaves are souls; flowers, queen.
“There’s a pain with every falling leaf” – great line to begin. It compels the reader to delve deeper to a beautiful ending full of hope. Loved the poem!
Hi Maniparna 🙂 I am here after many days and how nice to see your poem. It makes me realise that plants do have life… with the fast pace of life, I have forgotten about the feelings of other creatures and living things 🙂 Your poem was a pleasant read 🙂
Hi Vidyashree, really happy to see your after a long time. 🙂 Yes, these days, we really have a fast life..no time to stand at stare at beautiful things Nature has presented to us….
Always your poems are subtle and beautiful, and you do manage to capture such wonderful piece of nature in your camera, as if nature was waiting be pose for your lens.
Mind gets quickly refreshed with with your fresh thought and lovely picture…
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beautiful, beautiful … it reminds me of writings by Sumitranandan Pant… Perrrrrrfect !
Extraaaa love for this one dear 🙂
Its going to stay with me …
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Love those flowers. Remind me of my childhood. Frangipannier. Not a clue how it’s called in english.
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Superoooo… Beautiful..the pain, the life..Great job Mani 🙂 Loved the lines.. 🙂
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Again 🙂
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“There’s a pain with every falling leaf” – great line to begin. It compels the reader to delve deeper to a beautiful ending full of hope. Loved the poem!
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Thanks Moon for your generous comment…you always inspire me with your comments… 🙂
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I feel honoured when you say that. 🙂 I admire you a lot.
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cool one 🙂
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Thanks… 🙂
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Very nice and soulful!
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white is the color of peace and plants always live peacefully and supply our needy
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Indeed…very well said… 🙂
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Excellent! … ⭐ Best wishes, Aquileana 😀
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Thanks and welcome to my blog 😀
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What a beautiful poem and your photo is stunning!!
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Thanks a lot for dropping by …I really appreciate your comment… 🙂
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So profound.. There are great philosophies happening all around us all the time.. And you express it all so well..
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Thanks Roohi… your comment really made my day… 🙂
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Excellent Wording…. Rightly said!
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Thanks a lot Sreedhar ji… 🙂
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Loved it 🙂
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Thanks!
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beautiful picture, beautiful words my girl 🙂
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Thanks so much Archana..much love… 🙂
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Hi Maniparna 🙂 I am here after many days and how nice to see your poem. It makes me realise that plants do have life… with the fast pace of life, I have forgotten about the feelings of other creatures and living things 🙂 Your poem was a pleasant read 🙂
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Hi Vidyashree, really happy to see your after a long time. 🙂 Yes, these days, we really have a fast life..no time to stand at stare at beautiful things Nature has presented to us….
I wish one day I can go for a l-o-n-g vacation… 😀
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Nice words and a lovely pic.
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This touches the chords of heart, directly…Awesomely expressed!
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Thank you so much Susmit… 🙂
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Beautiful words Maniparna 🙂
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Thanks Renu… 🙂
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Always your poems are subtle and beautiful, and you do manage to capture such wonderful piece of nature in your camera, as if nature was waiting be pose for your lens.
Mind gets quickly refreshed with with your fresh thought and lovely picture…
😀
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That’s so nice of you Nihar. Such wonderful words from a person who himself captures lyrical pictures of Nature means a lot to me. 🙂 thanks a lot….
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Indeed a lovely combination of words and image…
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I can’t even imagine such things! Beautiful words Maniparna.
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Aww….thanks a lot for such nice words Mridula….you’re far too imaginative and creative with your camera….. 🙂
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Your poems are love only ! Every word , you transform each word into a poem ^_^
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Thanks so much Najm…. 🙂
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Your poems are love only ! You transform each word into a poem ^_^
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Thanks a lot for the nice compliment… 🙂
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nice words, equally nice pic
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Thank you Arora ji…. 🙂
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You have mastered the art of compressing meaning into a few words.
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Thanks Sir,..this means a lot to me… 🙂
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super personification and tht too in poetry is a lethal combo. lovely babe.
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Thanks Shweta..it’s always so inspiring hearing from you… 🙂
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This reminds me of my lost hair 😀 😀
Back to the serious path, this is a beautiful combination of picture and words 🙂
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😀 use Coconut oil..twice a day … 😀
Thankssss… 🙂
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Will think about it 😀
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sensitive words
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Thanks, glad you liked it… 🙂
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So beautiful …both the lines and the photographs
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Thanks Nabanita… 🙂
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Especially in love with the opening line. Lovely piece Maniparna!
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Thanks a lot Indah for your encouraging comment… 🙂
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but that is the truth of life.. everyone and everything has to go one day ..
a lovely REALISTIC poem
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Every beautiful thing dries up one day…yes, that’s a very hard and fast rule of life… 🙂
Thanks Bikram… 🙂
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Lovely. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 and welcome to my blog… 🙂
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The lines complementing the picture Maniparna. I always love your haiku… 🙂
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Thanks a lot dear, for your encouraging words… 🙂
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Wonderful lines. When a tree gives the world something beautiful it is because it is ready to give up something beautiful. Very nicely written 🙂
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Thanks Ashwini 🙂 yes, you’re so right… 🙂
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Very beautiful. You took the pic and then made a poem to match it? anyways loved reading it 🙂
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I first wrote the poem, then searched for a suitable pic from my archive… 😀 Finally, I settled on this… 🙂
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Haha. Oh you have a collection of pics then. Good 🙂
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Yes, I carry my camera/mobile wherever I go and click pics of flowers especially 🙂
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Good. Camera / Mobile is extended part of one’s body 🙂
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Beautiful! Adding on..
New dreams are budding, when old ones are ripe. So goes on the cycle of life 🙂
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That’s really so beautiful Somali 🙂 ❤ …Why don't you write more poems?
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You keep inspiring me with your haikus. I will keep writing 🙂
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It sounds so inspiring to me… 🙂
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This is beautiful!! 🙂 ❤
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Thanks Trini… ❤ 🙂
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