Life Oh ! Life
With every moment we proceed
A step more towards the day
The ultimate fate awaits all
Procrastination , you can say.
Shared with Dversepoets where the prompt is to write a micro poetry ( 140 characters or less ) inspired by macro photography. This being my first post for dVerse | Poets Pub and I would like to thank Abhra for letting me know about the existence of this wonderful site.
Photo and poem- very well correlated and also towards the eventuality for all of us. Very well done.
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Thanks for your appreciating comment..delighted to know that you liked it 🙂
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Both write up and the picture grabs attention.
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thanks Indrani 🙂
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The ultimate fate waits all !! That’s True. We don’t realise that and rushing in our lives without seeing the beauty of life!
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Well said.. that’s life..unfortunately people seldom realize this fact.. 🙂
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Sooner or later we will realize the facts!
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I hope so.. Amen… 🙂
BTW..Happy Holi 🙂
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Happy Holi. 🙂
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Beautiful picture and beautiful words.
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Thanks for the compliment..glad you liked it.. 🙂
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Very true, Mani…
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Yeah… it’s a harsh truth.. 😦
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Immense! Awesome!!
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Thanks Amit jee.. 🙂
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ahhhh! that was beautiful!
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Thanks Nabanita 🙂
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some very nice lines 🙂
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Thanks a lot Ankur 🙂
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This procrastination thing is so logically fitted over here. I loved this.
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Thanks for you appreciating comment dear.. you inspire me a lot 🙂
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Atleast you did not procrastinate on writing the poem 🙂
Is the reference to leaf dying or…?
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A dying leaf.. and specks of new life growing from it..life goes on.. 🙂
Welcome to my blog 🙂
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..loved your writing..conveyed the message beautifully.. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Ah procrastrinotors of the world unite… tomorrow….
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Beautiful – am very happy to see that you joined here 🙂
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Thanks….inspired by your posts.. 😛
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What a lovely way of thinking about it – softly sad as well.
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Thanks a lot Marina for the appreciation 🙂
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Lovely click and a lovelier write up. Kudos!
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Thanks 😀
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yay procrastination for the win =)
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Sure..:-)
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yeah… all of us awaits the same but hey…we have lots of time meanwhile to do a lot of good things and enjoy life..smiles
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Yes..that is called life..
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life is the ultimate procrastination hehee i don’t feel so bad about dithering now
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hehe..well said.. 😀
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ahh…and still I opt for procrastination… maybe it’s because in too busy smelling the roses…
very nice write.
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We all are opting for it.. 😀
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An interesting way of addressing death. Liked this one.
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Welcome! Your poetry, and photo, really added so much to the prompt. Well done! And I’m glad you joined us.
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Thanks a lot Shanyns 🙂
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we must shed our old selves and become the new – a thought provoking poem
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ha. procrastinate the final fate as long as you can and enjoy the days of our lives…..
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Yes….we all progress toward the ultimate fate. We don’t always like to think about it, but it is a fact of life for all.
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