An imaginative one dear and I loved the graphical nature of it.. ” shadow mocking her…none but she and the house …”
And the last line is meaningful, true,positive and philosophical 🙂
contemplative 🙂
Thanks Nihar for the thoughtful comment…just wanted to convey that there is nothing like an absolute end…love and hope, even when are far-fetched, can help anyone to end the end…. 🙂
Friends are good to have in goid times As well as in bad times We are richly blessed each and everyday that we can wake up is a wonderful blessing .Life is also a wonderful blessing to make new friends every where .
Oh! That’s great Roohi..will definitely read your post. Most of the times I agree with your points …so this time, it seems, our though waves have worked together 😀
“End to reborn”. Very powerful words! Underlines life indeed is a cycle!
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Thanks..glad that you liked the lines.. 🙂
Welcome to my blog… 🙂
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An imaginative one dear and I loved the graphical nature of it.. ” shadow mocking her…none but she and the house …”
And the last line is meaningful, true,positive and philosophical 🙂
contemplative 🙂
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Great imagery, your writing is magic today as love and hope hangs in the air.
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Thanks so much…it’s such an inspiring comment… 🙂
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Beautifully said, Maniparna. Inspiring as always 🙂
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Thanks so much … 🙂
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असल में जो अंत ही वही शुरुआत भी है … अच्छी पोइट्री …
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Well said Sir, the end is the new beginning… 🙂 Thanks and welcome to my blog… 🙂
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End of something is the beginning of other. Liked the concept. Very profound indeed. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Ravish…great to know you liked the concept… 🙂
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The opening is thrilling “the chair sits alone” and the entire poem is simply suuuuuuuperb! 🙂
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Thanks dear… 🙂
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Love and hope, two most profound words, wonderfully played with two more powerful words…mind and thought…
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Thanks Nihar for the thoughtful comment…just wanted to convey that there is nothing like an absolute end…love and hope, even when are far-fetched, can help anyone to end the end…. 🙂
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Friends are good to have in goid times As well as in bad times We are richly blessed each and everyday that we can wake up is a wonderful blessing .Life is also a wonderful blessing to make new friends every where .
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Very well said 🙂 Friends are always a blessing… thanks for your wonderful comment…
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Nice play of words, intrinsically emphasizing the importance of love and hope.
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Thanks a lot Alok for your nice comment… 🙂
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Wow this is refreshing. Nice idea, though tested and tried by people before, I really liked it 🙂
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Thank you… 😀
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superb! loved this. can imagine the whole setup with your words!
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Thanks dear….. great to know you liked the words… 🙂
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The black backdrop so aptly adds to the mood of the poem. A seamless creation★
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Thanks Susmit. Happy to know that the idea of black backdrop worked… 😀
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What a powerful poem! And beautifully visually presented. Though the subject is sad, the poem in its whole strikes an oddly peaceful note…
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It’s really an honour to have you on my blog. Glad to know that the subtle note of hope had made you happy 🙂 Thanks for the wonderful comment…. 🙂
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The pleasure is all mine!
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🙂
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Beautifully expressed Maniparna. It’s truly all in our mind – love and hope.
Thanks and regards.
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Thanks for dropping by Dilip… 🙂
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My latest entry with D for A to Z challenge is on same theme, Mani 🙂 U and I were thinking on same line at some time.. Nice lines..
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Oh! That’s great Roohi..will definitely read your post. Most of the times I agree with your points …so this time, it seems, our though waves have worked together 😀
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Waiting to be reborn. The thought is endearing. You have painted a vivid picture with your words Maniparna.
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Thanks a lot… a subtle note of hope…I wanted to convey… 🙂
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