To all the Devdasses. 🎵https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=X7IyFXtuWjI
I hope we can celebrate the memory of the ‘love’ by doing what he/she loved most in life.
Maniparna, I read the haiku a couple of times and each time the three lines and the darkness in the pic had kind of a numbing effect. Maybe, I read it at a wrong time, or maybe the haiku has the power to suck the reader into a vacuum.
I think you’ve got it very, very rightly, Somali. Sometimes, thoughts are just dark and meant to produce a darker feeling to the reader…Thank you so much…
Poignant! ❤
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so deep 👌
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Perfect combo of visual and words! Well done!
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To all the Devdasses. 🎵https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=X7IyFXtuWjI
I hope we can celebrate the memory of the ‘love’ by doing what he/she loved most in life.
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That’s a wise idea… 🙂
Thanks for lovely gazal… awesome rendition by Pankaj Udhas
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Oooohh… Mysterious. Love it. Sparks my imagination. ❤
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Thanks, Elizabeth… ❤
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Awesome 🙂
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Thanks… 🙂
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“he drank the darkness”… I love this line! So cool!
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Thanks so much, dear… 🙂
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An intriguing poem to a lovely unusual photo shot.. ❤ Wishing you a Happy Weekend.. ❤
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Glad you liked the picture along with the haiku, Sue. this click is my personal favourite… ❤
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Wonderful words again Mani.. ❤
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🙂 Thanks loads…
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How intense and profound. Love it!
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Thanks, Vishal… 🙂
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Maniparna, I read the haiku a couple of times and each time the three lines and the darkness in the pic had kind of a numbing effect. Maybe, I read it at a wrong time, or maybe the haiku has the power to suck the reader into a vacuum.
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I think you’ve got it very, very rightly, Somali. Sometimes, thoughts are just dark and meant to produce a darker feeling to the reader…Thank you so much…
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Short but so powerful
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Oh…yes… Thank you so much… 🙂
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Wow! Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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You’re welcome
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🙂 …
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Short and sweet!
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Thank you… 🙂
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Oh Mani! That’s a punchy haiku. Excellent🙏😊
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Thanks a lot, Andy. Glad you liked it… 🙂
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Few lines but a bunch of emotions peeping through that.
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Ekdawm…you got it!
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Touching Haiku… Beautifully penned, Maniparna.
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Thanks, Kiran… ❤
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Wow! Lovely words and the most befitting image.
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Thank you!
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I wonder… is it metaphorical or reality…both ways it is profoundly perfect Mani. 🙂 The choice of words is fantastically handled.
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Thanks so much, Balroop… maybe it’s a reality….
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Neat. Clever but sinister.
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Oh! Thanks… 🙂
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Sombrely dignified. Beautiful!
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Thank you… 🙂
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Im not anonymous!
Sorry, Maniparna, stupid wordPress
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Oh.. happens…WP really behaves in a strange way sometimes…
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Maniparna
This is a splendid haiku.
Thank you for sharing
Big hugs
john
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Thanks so much, John…means a lot… 🙂 ❤
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Loved this
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Thank you!
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So deep! Wonderful.
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Thank you… 🙂
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Oh my God, Maniparna, this is quite alluring .
I am a big fan of yours 😊
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Thanks a lot, KJ… 🙂 So glad you liked it…
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Really wonderful Maniparna
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Awesome one….the last line has brought an essence in the poem.
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thank you, Jyotirmoy… you got it rightly… 🙂
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