I stood as the silence sang Within me. That long-lost stream of thought Was reviving in its purest form. The agony that haunted me Became soothing, Solace reigned again Making me alive In my soliloquy. An amniotic tranquillity Found its way, deep within.
The first line alone speaks volumes “alone and yet in company”, silence sings when we are deep withing and reflecting the true essence of life and there are agony of life and when we sit in solitude and reflect those moments. There is a sudden surge of emotions and the thoughts if not controlled gets derailed and we need that solid anchor and family and friends have always provided that support system but when we want time for our own self we want that time for us, not with family and friend but with self and when we see a different world around us and also within us, we discover everything silently caged in some corner.
Thanks Mani for sharing and keeping us reflecting on our hibernated thoughts.
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Your critical appreciation always amazes me. You have revealed the exact emotions I wanted to portray through the lines. Thanks a lot, Nihar. I really appreciate your comment very much… 🙂
Toamr kachhe onar naam sonar porer din-e aami onar saathe twitter through contact kori r tarpor whatsapp through, uni sotty atyonto helpful, aami jokhoni kono help chai uni kore den.
Tomake eta aagei janano uchit chhilo, i am extremely sorry for that, actually ami last koekta din heavy pressure e chhilam, kicchu mone koro na.
Toamke onek thanks onar naam ta mention korar jonyo.
I don’t know if the transition of feelings from the wretched loneliness to soothing solitude could be better expressed in words. I loved this composition, Maniparna.
Alone and yet in a company … you can feel it by a seaside. The waves at the dawn bring out that silent music from the depth of the sea which rhyme with your thoughts deep inside in your heart. Beautiful poem, Maniparna.
Bit of a haunting poem, Mani. It takes time to come to realisations and have that ephiphany moments. Definitely agree that it comes from deep within and beneath all our layers. Lovely shot to go along with your poetry as usual 😊
Haha… ekdawm..Digha tei…ekebaare bhorbela..tokhon beach fNaka chhilo sudhu ini boshechhilen eka. As I clicked the picture, the lines came into my mind… 🙂
Koto picture ache ei jaygay tate..Ekbaar ei sunrise dekhte giye e puro dheu vijiye diechilo,but still sunrise dekhar annondo e alada..Ei chobi ta dekhe sob memory gulo fire elo ar tomar lekha always durdanto.
Such a beautiful poem! 🙂
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Hmmmm😊 inner peace. Beautiful Mani 🙏❤️
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Thanks so much, Andy… 🙂
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You have captured the moment so poignantly! Lovely poetry, Mani 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Prajakta… 🙂
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B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you… ❤
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I CAN feel every words , so relatable .
Loved it , keep going 👍🏻👍🏻
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Thanks for the words of appreciation… 🙂
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interesting blog! If anyone is interested in random deep thoughts that occur to you at odd and idle times,be sure to check my page out!
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Thanks. Will check your blog… 🙂
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Beautifully composition. Your words convey the mood perfectly, Maniparna 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Meera… 🙂
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The first line alone speaks volumes “alone and yet in company”, silence sings when we are deep withing and reflecting the true essence of life and there are agony of life and when we sit in solitude and reflect those moments. There is a sudden surge of emotions and the thoughts if not controlled gets derailed and we need that solid anchor and family and friends have always provided that support system but when we want time for our own self we want that time for us, not with family and friend but with self and when we see a different world around us and also within us, we discover everything silently caged in some corner.
Thanks Mani for sharing and keeping us reflecting on our hibernated thoughts.
😀
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Your critical appreciation always amazes me. You have revealed the exact emotions I wanted to portray through the lines. Thanks a lot, Nihar. I really appreciate your comment very much… 🙂
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Mani, always a pleasure reading your profoundly insightful thoughts and you do so every time and all your posts are of high quality.
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Thanks so much for your warm words of appreciation… means a lot… 🙂
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Always my pleasure…
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Beautifully expressed…a very common feelings of every introvert…as i think, can relate with it deeply.
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Thanks, Jyotirmoy. I’ve contacted the blogger I mentioned, through Facebook, but yet to receive any reply. Maybe he is busy or something.
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Toamr kachhe onar naam sonar porer din-e aami onar saathe twitter through contact kori r tarpor whatsapp through, uni sotty atyonto helpful, aami jokhoni kono help chai uni kore den.
Tomake eta aagei janano uchit chhilo, i am extremely sorry for that, actually ami last koekta din heavy pressure e chhilam, kicchu mone koro na.
Toamke onek thanks onar naam ta mention korar jonyo.
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আরে না…মনে করার কী আছে। পাগল নাকি 😀 আমি-ই বরং সেই সময় অনেক দেরী করে রেস্পন্স করেছি তোমাকে… 🙂
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I don’t know if the transition of feelings from the wretched loneliness to soothing solitude could be better expressed in words. I loved this composition, Maniparna.
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Thanks a lot, Somali, for the words of appreciation. Really means a lot… 🙂
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Alone and yet in a company … you can feel it by a seaside. The waves at the dawn bring out that silent music from the depth of the sea which rhyme with your thoughts deep inside in your heart. Beautiful poem, Maniparna.
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থ্যাঙ্ক ইউ, ইন্দ্রজিৎদা, দেরী হল অনেক উত্তর দিতে… অনেকদিন পর সব রিপ্লাই দিতে বসেছি… 🙂
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lovely weave of the words, Maniparna!
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Thank you … 🙂
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So beautiful Maniparna!
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Wonderfully put! Loved it.
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Thanks!
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Lovely expression, Mani. How can one be alone when the ocean speaks, the wind caresses, the stars wink…? Your poetry stirs my soul and inspires me. ❤️
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That’s so nice of you to say, Rose. The admiration is mutual… ❤ ❤
Sorry for being so-o-o late with the reply…
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Bah!!!
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🙂 …
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Bit of a haunting poem, Mani. It takes time to come to realisations and have that ephiphany moments. Definitely agree that it comes from deep within and beneath all our layers. Lovely shot to go along with your poetry as usual 😊
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Thank you, Mabel. Yes, the realization comes rarely, but, when it dawns upon, it hits us like a lightning. Sorry for such a late reply… 🙂
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I know the song of silence Mani, I have heard and felt its melody. Beautifully penned thought.
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That you’ve felt it, is evident in your poems, Balroop. That blissful song of silence!
Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Nice one 🙂
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Thanks, Joshi… 🙂
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Beautiful. I’m glad you found (if indeed you experienced this), yourself within the silence – which is a tranquil peace.
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Yes, I’ve experienced it a couple of times. It’s overwhelming!
Thanks for stopping by… 🙂
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So very hard to “get there.” How awesome for you that you did! xox Kimba
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Thanks so much for the inspiration, Kimberley… 🙂
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Thank you, for you.
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You wrapped it beautifully.. ❤
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Glad you liked…thank you… 🙂
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Alone and yet in company….that’s a wonderful feeling to experience Mani! Beautiful piece!!
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Thanks a lot, Radhika. Being alone sometimes is a bliss… 🙂
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I agree 🙂
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Everytime you amaze me with your writing.(The first thought that came to my mind when I saw this pic was ‘Dighaaaa’.)
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Haha… ekdawm..Digha tei…ekebaare bhorbela..tokhon beach fNaka chhilo sudhu ini boshechhilen eka. As I clicked the picture, the lines came into my mind… 🙂
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Koto picture ache ei jaygay tate..Ekbaar ei sunrise dekhte giye e puro dheu vijiye diechilo,but still sunrise dekhar annondo e alada..Ei chobi ta dekhe sob memory gulo fire elo ar tomar lekha always durdanto.
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Hnya, aamar-o achhe 🙂 …sob Bangali’r Digha niye prochur memory thaake… 😀 bolei toh bangalir achhe দীপুদা= দীঘা-পুরী-দার্জিলিং 😀 😀
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Ahhh! Sweet serenity. Beautifully spoken Mani 😊🙏
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Thank you, Andy. I’m sure you’re enjoying your trip!
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Sooo peaceful,Soo nice
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It was early morning, almost dawn…… when I clicked the picture. The peace was palpable… 🙂 Thanks, Kalyan…
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beautifully captured words!
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Thanks, dear… 🙂
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‘an amniotic tranquility’ is good
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Yes, a blissful one. Thanks, Derrick… 🙂
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