This is great Maniparna! I love the different senses that you included in this poem. So lovely to connect with you today. Sending you blessings, my friend. ❤ Debbie
The moon tugs me too as if i was the tide in the oceans…a sensual yet loony attraction. Enjoyed the poem. Inspired by this i just posted a poem that happened during a particularly beautiful full moon to my page. Have a look when you find time 🙂
Thanks, Prajakta. I’ve been away from blogging for quite a month. Doing well…
If I can remember, you injured your hand, isn’t it? Hope things are now great at your end… 🙂
Moon, the metaphor of life…such a beautiful way to set the celestial divinity of life in perspective. I always wondered how do you manage to pluck such magical lines and thoughts that touches the true essence of love and relationships that are so vital to the existence of human life and living. Few words but each words weighed so well that it can lift us from the state of gloom and doom to hope and aspiration…therein lies the art of living our life and learning that art that takes us beyond our capability and makes us realize what we can do and how we can change the way we deal with our life.
Wishing you Mani a lovely Diwali and yes, a safe Diwali!!!
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Beautiful concoction of romantic and divine love. It reflects your deep understanding of love….And the last two lines…That’s the essence. You said a lot in a few words. Kudos, Maniparna 🙂
She comes tiptoed, her mysterious smile, her face differently radiant each day- such evocative words paint a vivid imagery. Beautifully penned Maniparna,:)
Is moon ‘she’? What a refreshing view! Your awe-inspiring poem reminded me of the classic song…”Tu mera chaand main teri Chandani…
Most of the poets have portrayed moon as ‘he.’ 🙂
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This is great Maniparna! I love the different senses that you included in this poem. So lovely to connect with you today. Sending you blessings, my friend. ❤ Debbie
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The moon tugs me too as if i was the tide in the oceans…a sensual yet loony attraction. Enjoyed the poem. Inspired by this i just posted a poem that happened during a particularly beautiful full moon to my page. Have a look when you find time 🙂
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Delightful Maniparna! Hugs my sister!
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This was so magical Mani!! 🙂 Warms my heart… Hope you are doing well!
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Thanks, Prajakta. I’ve been away from blogging for quite a month. Doing well…
If I can remember, you injured your hand, isn’t it? Hope things are now great at your end… 🙂
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The moon enchants us all Mani, and this was another such occasion Hope you are well..
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Thanks a lot, Sue. Yes, back to blogging again (hopefully) … ❤
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Good to see you back x
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❤ …
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Beautifully composed Maniparna, you’re a wizard with words! “Surreptitiously kissing the stars”….mesmerizing line!
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Thank you, Divya…your comments always make me feel special… 🙂
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What a cool line, “A drop of moon, drink it now.” Just beautiful!
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Thank you so much. Glad to know you loved the line… 🙂
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Moon, the metaphor of life…such a beautiful way to set the celestial divinity of life in perspective. I always wondered how do you manage to pluck such magical lines and thoughts that touches the true essence of love and relationships that are so vital to the existence of human life and living. Few words but each words weighed so well that it can lift us from the state of gloom and doom to hope and aspiration…therein lies the art of living our life and learning that art that takes us beyond our capability and makes us realize what we can do and how we can change the way we deal with our life.
Wishing you Mani a lovely Diwali and yes, a safe Diwali!!!
😀
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beautiful!
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Thanks, Neha… 🙂
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Mind enticing and the flow simply captures the senses.
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Mesmerizing, my dear Mani. The flow and beauty of your words are entrancing. 💝
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Amazing writing as usual 🙂
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Lovely writing Maniparna
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Beautiful concoction of romantic and divine love. It reflects your deep understanding of love….And the last two lines…That’s the essence. You said a lot in a few words. Kudos, Maniparna 🙂
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Very well written in limited lines with nice imagination
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She comes tiptoed, her mysterious smile, her face differently radiant each day- such evocative words paint a vivid imagery. Beautifully penned Maniparna,:)
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Drink a drop of moon and gain sanity….. just loved that maniparna..👏👏
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Well Written !!!
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You have a way with your words
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Very nicely penned…Loved it a lot.
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Is moon ‘she’? What a refreshing view! Your awe-inspiring poem reminded me of the classic song…”Tu mera chaand main teri Chandani…
Most of the poets have portrayed moon as ‘he.’ 🙂
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Brilliantly written. Your posts are so creative and awe inspiring. Checkout mine as well. You might like some.
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Beauty is scattered everywhere in the picture as well the words. Wow Maniparna Ji, Wow !
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A drop of moon for sanity… beautiful.
A contrast to the belief that the insanity increases on the full moon night.
A beautiful poem.
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Beautifully penned!
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Beautify written
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Drips of mind crunching images to the mind
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So dreamy the words 😍
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❤❤❤
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❤ … Thanks, Shweta…
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