A moment’s pause, deep within Salty taste of nostalgia Glistened drops on dry cheek Heart bleeds tears. A shame? Never it is. Reshuffling of thoughts Or pain unknown, Agony Unbearable, Let them rise and flow Setting you free.
You rightly said, Maniparna, there’s no shame in showing tears. In fact, it liberates the soul. Most of the emotional problems of men will vanish if they are not shamed for shedding tears.
Love how you wrote this poem, Mani. That last line is also a wonderful way to wrap up the poem. There is no shame in crying – it is an expression of how we feel, and also an way to express ourselves. Tough times only make us realise how stronger we are, and when we let ourselves feel the pain, that’s when we can stand up and move on once again 🙂
Very nice one,
“free” it makes for the time being….sometime it continues to flow repeatedly for the same pain…i think so.
“Heart bleeds tears”…loved this a lot.
It does not reflect the weakness of someone but sometime it reflects the stupidity of that person when it flows for same reason repeatedly…not sure, its from my confused thoughts.
The Tears that sets one Free
Shiva
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Rightly so… 🙂
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Beautiful. A wonderful tribute to this amazing photo.
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Thanks so much, Sumanadi… 🙂
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Such beautifully you illustrated every feeling.Osadhoron as always Maniparna di.
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Thanks re… ❤
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Nice picture c and wonderful comparison
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Supab… All the best
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You rightly said, Maniparna, there’s no shame in showing tears. In fact, it liberates the soul. Most of the emotional problems of men will vanish if they are not shamed for shedding tears.
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lovely lines
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Now and again you simply need to give them a chance to stream. Adored this! Extraordinary occupation!..
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Sometimes you just have to let them flow. Loved this! Great job! 🙂
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True that…thanks, Shweta… 🙂
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😊
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Beautifully expressed…👌👍
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Thanks so much… 🙂
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Nostalgia brings a drip and drop of tears that should be released. So well painted expression and description.
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Salty Tears are natures balm, healing from inside out.. as we let go the emotions that need to flow..
Beautiful verse.. and Magical photo .. ❤
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“Reshuffling of thoughts
Or pain unknown,
Agony Unbearable,
Let them rise and flow
Setting you free.” …So wonderful!
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Thanks a lot, Moon… 🙂
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👍👍👌👏👏
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‘…salty taste of nostalgia’, these words are so true
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Much needed article…loved your coining of words…expressed so beautifully…
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Love how you wrote this poem, Mani. That last line is also a wonderful way to wrap up the poem. There is no shame in crying – it is an expression of how we feel, and also an way to express ourselves. Tough times only make us realise how stronger we are, and when we let ourselves feel the pain, that’s when we can stand up and move on once again 🙂
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Tears rolling down the cheeks are emotions flowing in a liquid state. 😉 What’s there to be ashamed of? Beautiful penned, Maniparna.
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like a jewellery 😉
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Really…Thank you… 🙂
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Beautifully expressed Mani.😊
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Thanks a lot, Sumith… 🙂
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So pretty!
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Exactly. Some people believe in holding them in, keeping them captive. While others just let them flow, setting them free…..
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Good one.with apt picture
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Love this, you capture the emotions so well and the ultimate realise that tears can bring. Wonderful.
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Beautiful! Man or Woman: emotions leading to tears are natural. And they do set you free! Why not😉?!
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Salty taste of nostalgia.. wow what a composition
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A beautiful poem. You write well.
How long you have been writing?
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Thanks a lot. This blog is three-year-old… 🙂
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Oh yes. And relief tooo sometimes
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Reblogged this on Sacred Touches.
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Thanks so much dear Natalie ❤
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This is greatness, Mani! 🙂 ❤
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So glad you liked it… 🙂
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I always feel better after a good cry 🙂 Excellent piece Mani 🙂
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The same here…it’s cathartic… 🙂
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indeed 🙂
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Very nice one,
“free” it makes for the time being….sometime it continues to flow repeatedly for the same pain…i think so.
“Heart bleeds tears”…loved this a lot.
It does not reflect the weakness of someone but sometime it reflects the stupidity of that person when it flows for same reason repeatedly…not sure, its from my confused thoughts.
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Wonderful!
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Thank you. Have you deleted your WP blog?? It’s showing “no longer available” … 😦
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I have got out of blogger. I have transferred to wordpress (occassionalmusingsblogpost.wordpress.com)
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Tears are not a sign of weakness. They are a sign that you are not afraid of expressing your grief and emotions. Beautifully written!
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Tears are natural response of your body to heal itself. Great words
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Beautifully said. Wish I could write so poetically.
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Nice and true. Most people do not cry as if it would make them any less strong. But, crying is strength. It can never be weakness!
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Nice done short and punchy to relay a message effectively. And yes tears set you free
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Tears are cathartic…what a natural way to dispel toxic fumes out of our hearts ♥️
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Beautiful expression. 🙂
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