It is wonderful to try and say so much in so few words and you manage very well Maniparna 🙂 I too, love the micro poetry and haiku/senryu and lately also Tanka 🙂
A bittersweet poem, Mani. Holding on to tears, well on hold on to memories. Sometimes that is hard, but they can also teach us to be stronger 🙂 Wonderfully written, and so emotional ❤
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Wow 🙂
How do you write these 🙂
Loved it splendid !!
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So poignant! Loved it dear :’)
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So much has already been said. I only resonate that applaud with my own. Beautiful and powerful.
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Wow..just loved the last one !!
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Glad to read your poetry again!
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Beauty captured in tiny capsules of emotion! Well written!
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Sometimes, few words say a lot more than a whole paragraph…thank you so much, glad you liked it… 🙂
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You are a PRO! 🙂 Loved the last one. Restrained emotions and undying memories 🙂
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Thanks so much, Divyakshi, made my day… 😀
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🙂
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First one! First one’s too good.. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Prakash… 🙂
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Micro? Humongous!!
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Coming from you, means a lot, Amitji… 🙂
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Let the tears drop from the tender cheeks and touch the warmth of the heart only then the heart heals.Gracefully and superbly written Maniparna.
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And, you have summed it up wonderfully, Sir…. 🙂 hats off…
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Tears of long past.. to hold or not to hold….
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That is the question… 😛 😀
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Beautiful lines bestie….
this genre
A pro
Only you!
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Aww…that’s so sweet of you to say it in such a beautiful way… ❤ you…
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Nice ones Maniparna. Love recycled… well said 🙂
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Hehe…thanks… 😀
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Loved it, nicely written.
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thank you, Jyotirmoy… 🙂
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Sigh maniparna.. the heart beats… Sometimes it’s better it let go of those tears…
Brilliant!
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Indeed!
Thank you… 🙂
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The flow captures the essence of love in all its forms, Mani:)
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Thank you, Vishal…:-)
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Beautiful thoughts
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Thanks so much, Sara… 🙂
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Recycled love, lost life, salty tears and beating hearts! well Ma’am…. beautiful…
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Thank you!
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My pleasure…
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Profoundly emotional, each word stirring many memories! Superbly penned.
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Coming from you, that means a lot….thank you, Balroop… 🙂
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Wow Maniparna, brilliant writing.
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Thanks, Mary… 🙂
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Beautiful emotions there dear Mani, my favourite is the first one.
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Thanks so much, dear…:-)
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The heart still beats
Goosebumps
Taking her name
Shiva
😍
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Beautiful… 🙂
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There’s a beautiful rhythm in your poetry. Reading your words is truly a gift! ❤
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You made my Sunday… ❤ ❤ Thanks so much, Rose… 🙂
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Oh yes still beats. …
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Excellent Maniparna – I particularly like the first three line micro-poem 🙂
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P.S. That pic is amazing!
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Thank you so much!!… 🙂
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I’m falling in love with micro poetry along with haiku… 😀
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It is wonderful to try and say so much in so few words and you manage very well Maniparna 🙂 I too, love the micro poetry and haiku/senryu and lately also Tanka 🙂
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Just read your poems, Andy…wonderfully penned… 🙂
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You comments make me happy, thanks Maniparna
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Beautifully worded, Maniparna. Sometimes, we try to be strong and the tears don’t flow. The emotional pain can be worst than the physical pain.
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So very true! Physical pain can be healed, but the emotional pain stays for long….
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Stylish micros touching upon themes of psychology and sustainability. 😀 Loved these Maniparna.
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Thank you, Somali… 🙂
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Sadly sweet!
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🙂 thanks…
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Simply beautiful. 😃
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Thanks…:-)
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Lofty emotions there, always good to let go the tears…….
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Yes, I always think so… they act as a catharsis…
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micro poetry reflects some mega thoughts.. beautiful indeed
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Thanks, Akhila….glad you liked them… 🙂
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my pleasure.. have a great time
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A bittersweet poem, Mani. Holding on to tears, well on hold on to memories. Sometimes that is hard, but they can also teach us to be stronger 🙂 Wonderfully written, and so emotional ❤
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Thanks so much, Mabel. Yes, through our experiences, be that bitter or sweet, we just grow up and become stronger… 🙂
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Beautiful, it reminded me of a poem I wrote years ago…
“Renewal”
A soft word spoken
A fire does rise
A soft, soft smile brings
A heart to life
A look of need from
Embracing eyes
Renews the fires of love
That had once died in life.
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Your poems, your words are gems my sister! God bless!
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Love your poem…it says so much with so less words!
Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment… 🙂
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Lovely Mani!
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Thanks, Lynn… 🙂
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