The rain was pouring down.
Raindrops lashed her soft cheeks
Still, she was walking down the lane
Alone, unperturbed.
She was contemplating of the past
Of things happened years ago,
No look back in anger,
Repentance, nothing to mourn.
The journey, she should take alone
The rain was rejuvenating her
She was drenched
But she didn’t care.
One day she should reach there
Where happiness persists
Enduring the emotional unrest
Of tears and the tempest.
One day the rain will cease.
Clear blue sky and gentle breeze;
Golden sunshine would be there
No dark clouds, nothing to fear.
As fresh as a new green leaf.
No confinement to mortal grief.
Peace will come and give her a kiss
She will achieve that celestial bliss.
Hope and joy. Such a happy poem:) a big hug for spreading positivity!
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Thanks so much, dear… (hugs) 🙂
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Having achieved that Celestial Bliss.
She would want to know more of it.
Then shall come the Angels of Knowledge.
She shall be protected by the other Gods.
To make her path an Oasis of serenity.
In the tranquility she shall reach the Goal.
Mani!
Is that enough.
In the context, I want you to read my Post “Celestial Embrace” if you have the time.
Shiva
🙂
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…touched the soul ….
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So touching ! Such expressions are meant to be felt and empathized only.
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Thanks a lot, Mathurji… 🙂
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Very touchy, can relate with it very deeply.
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Thank you… pujor shubheccha roilo…khub bhalo kaTuk… 🙂
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So beautifully woven, your words indeed create magic! Loved your composition dear ❤
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Thanks a lot, Maitreni 🙂 You have always been an inspiration yourself along with your mother… 🙂
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Happiness, peace against sorrow and war..this is what I perceive from the lovely words of this poem and very apt to humankind today!
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That’s the crux! Essentially… 🙂 Thanks a lot…
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🙂
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Beautiful composition. The last stanza is simply wonderful!
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Thanks a lot…glad you liked it… 🙂
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Amen to your wishes for your heroine! Beautiful words.
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Thanks, Mridula… 🙂
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simply beautiful… 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 …
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Maniparna your poetry is par excellence, highly positive and depicting the various stages of life( “the rain pouring down”) passing by, especially the past full of bewitching and enticing memories, touching her emotionally, physically and deep inside like a wild storm and in the end peace will come from a hidden desire of lifetime in the form of a kiss from a heavenly blessedness.Very touching,arousing and awakening.
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Thanks a lot for catching the essence of the poem and presenting it in your wonderful words. I’m really overwhelmed by your words of appreciation… 🙂
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hey..beautiful poem.. will the rain stop? and liked the ‘peace kissing’ part!
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Thanks… 🙂
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Love your blogs
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Nothing can be more beautiful than hope and determination. Brought a big smile on my face!
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True that…. thank you so much… 🙂
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Peace will come and give her a kiss
Beautiful journey’s end – perseverance brings hope.
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Yes, and we live in accordance with that. Thanks, Anita… 🙂
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beautiful thoughts 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂 ….
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Excellent poem on thoughts of walking through life’s problems that often can soak us to the core of our souls.. But knowing all storms pass if we just keep on keeping on..
Loved your Poem
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Wonderfully explained, Sue. That’s the crux of life…. We all pass through different phases at different times but nothing stays for long… 🙂
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Exactly! 🙂 ❤
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Getting through something surely does make one a stronger person.
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Always…!
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Hope, happiness and bliss put together in the lovely poem. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful!
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🙂 Thanks…
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Rain is plentiful where I live, and I actually miss it when we’ve had a dry spell for awhile. Your potent words call to me, and I loved your description of how rain is rejuvenating. After the rain, there’s a feeling of rebirth in the green plants and the sunlight. I’m so easily lost in your words, Mani, and I wouldn’t have it any other way. xo
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Rain is a symbol of life, in Nature as well for human beings. Monsoon has set in here and I always am deeply in love with rain. Thanks so much, Rose, for your generous words, they always make me happy… <<3 🙂
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Keep safe during the turbulence. I enjoy your posts so much and look forward to them!
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Thanks for the encouraging words. Have a nice weekend ahead… ❤
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In the hope of ‘Golden sunshine’ we can walk through all the topsy-turvy turbulent times with ease that accompanies us unseen!
Love the determination of moving ahead. Thanks for the inspiration Mani 🙂 Stay blessed.
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Thanks, Balroop. It’s that hope and inspiration that keep us moving… 🙂
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You manage to transport us to your world of words so easily! Well done.
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Thanks a lot, Vibha… 🙂
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A quiet and spirited tune this poem held 🙂
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Thank you….glad you liked the tune… 🙂
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Optimism at its best, beautiful!
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Thank you 🙂 …
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Very moving, the power to struggle and optimism combined!
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Thanks, Indah…yes…that’s the essence… 🙂
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You brought out the emotions so well. Beauty! 🙂
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Thanks, Meera… 🙂
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Flawlessly beautiful 🙂
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Thanks… ❤
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Hope she reaches there soon 🙂
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I hope so, too… 🙂
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wow, beautiful!
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Thank you… 🙂
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Too good
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Thanks… 🙂
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A timely post, Maniparna. Beautifully written with such finesse.
Sometimes we have to close a door so we can move on. But we also have to be mindful that we don’t have to lock and seal all the doors but be prepare to keep a door ajar. Life is not black and white.
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Wonderfully said, thanks for the wise words… 🙂
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Very beautiful, the emotions, the words, the descriptions ..everything!
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Thank you, Hema… 🙂
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Oh yes and god willing that day is just round the corner. ..
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I wish that too… 🙂
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Beautiful, loved it .. Touched my Heart 🙂
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So glad you liked it…thank you… ❤
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Great writing !
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Thank you!… 🙂
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Hope is what the human mind always likes to hold on to during troubled times. Very well penned Maniparna 😊
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True, that is the driving force… 🙂
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Yes, sometimes,one door need to be closed for a new one to open. Lovely – Maniparna 😀
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Absolutely true….well said, Chevy… 🙂
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Hopeful and beautifully penned 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂 hope holds us in dark times…
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It does 🙂
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🙂 …….
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Beautiful and peaceful! Very moving…
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Thanks so much, Amy… 🙂
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This is so so beautiful !!!!
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Thanks, dear… 🙂
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it’s beautiful!
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Thank you… 🙂
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