Tanka: Icy

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melting in the Β warmth
of nature, the ice caressed
dry skin of the leaves,
but ice cold relations
seldom yield and thrive in love

58 responses to “Tanka: Icy

  1. I love how you use nature as a mirror for life, I love it and it seems that this year the snow is staying with us longer than usual.

    • Nature is a mirror of life. You can find life’s every nuances in nature. πŸ™‚
      Yeah, snow is really staying for a longer time this year in your part of the world. My sister was complaining yesterday as well… πŸ˜€

  2. An icy relation is as slippery as the ice formed on the road after the snow melts! Good one Mani.

  3. I think we just need to work on it too and just like the ice melts leaving the leaves cool and fresh tooo… We can turn the icy relationship to warm got relations….

  4. I agree sometimes relationships get “icy” and cold feelings. Once this develops Love seems to fade from lack of attention. Nicely described photo with deeper meaning given, Maniparna. ❀

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