As raindrops froze one by one
Imagine yourself to climb up
Stepping stones of happiness
Ethereal enchantment.
Teardrops froze on the cheeks
Leaving their footsteps
Etched forever as scars
Deep withing the heart.
Memories flow, freeze, but
They never evaporate…..
Scattered Thoughts 
hmmm, ‘rain drops, tear drops and memories’, a nice combination!! excellent one, mani
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Thank you… 🙂
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my pleasure senora
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It looked like Life to me broken scattered yet so beautiful whatever left has to be taken care of .. Beautiful it is ..
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Absolutely…life is like that…very well said, dear… 🙂
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Thanku 🙂
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With a touch of wisdom… 🙂 beautiful 🙂
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Thanksss… 🙂
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🙂 … thanks, Rinaldo…
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The leaf fit the title but I felt the Haiku was much more “connected” than “disjointed.” You really wrote this excellent natural wonders haiku.
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Memories never die, good ones will always make us smile 🙂 Truly beautiful, Maniparna.
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True…memories linger, always… 🙂
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Just lovely!
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Wow this was beautiful Maniparna!
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Thanks a lot… ^_^
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খুব সুন্দর লেখা। 🙂
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অনেক ধন্যবাদ… 🙂
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Wow! This is amazing!
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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😀
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Reminded me of a song Memories never Die which happens to be a title track of a malayalam movie. Also reminded me of a poem I wrote long time back….Memories never evaporate. 🙂
Good one!
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Share the link…please… ^_^ Want to have a look… :_)
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Aare, YouTube is blocked at work 😛 (Sadist people)
But it’s easy, search memories never die from the movie Memories. The song is English though a malayalam movie. 😀
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YT blocked :O …sadist indeed… 😛
Okay..will find that out… 🙂
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🙂
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Thoughtful, vivid, it carries a philosophy in just 15 lines 🙂
Amazing !!!
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Thank you for the generous words…. 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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Keep smiling 🙂
And sharing some beautiful work !!
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Thanks for the encouragement…. means a lot… 🙂
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You deserve every bit of it !
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^_^ ….
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Am sorry , I don’t know the meaning of this sign.. 🙂 is the limit of my knowledge …
But god bless you… This is what I can pray!
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Haha..it’s just a ‘happy’ emotiocn… 🙂
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Okay.. I don’t have any clue of all this, be it WhatsApp, Fb, or even this word press..
All I have learned from her ….
I wish this happiness remains with you always !!!
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Thank you once again. Actually, I love to use the emoticons a lot… 😀
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It’s nice, emotions often speak louder than words !! And in the process people like me can understand new things:)
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Beautifully written with potent imagery. ❤️❄️
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Thanks…glad you liked it… 🙂
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Lovely contrast, Maniparna. Loved the way you juxtaposed them. Btw, what happened to that story? Has the concluding part been published?
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Thanks, Ravish… 🙂
No, 😛 I think I should write it now…thanks for the nudge… 😀
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Quite a good contrast in them, with a perfect logical end!
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Thanks, Alok… 🙂
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Memories…Frozen they remain. In time, in the heart and in the mind. This was absolutely beautiful.
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Thanks a lot, Rekha 🙂 Memories never leave us alone…
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A beautiful poem… May those frozen droplets soon melt as we learn to let them go back into the ether keeping only the traces of their salt… A substance we all need in our lives.. Joy…. and Pain……
Lovely poetry and theme..
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Thanks, Sue 🙂 True, we need no accept life as it comes, but then again, sometimes, we do look back ….memories..smiles and tears as well…
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Yes all the past though creates us in the now.. so despite the tears it all makes for who we are.. Much love and Blessings your way Maniparna xx
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Thanks a lot for your profound words..:-) ❤ …
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I especially liked the bits about memories, although I have some I wish would evaporate (such my struggles with mathematics in high school).
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Hehe..we all want a part of our memories to evaporate. 😀 But, they are so stubborn! Mathematics was okay…I dreaded physics 😦 the worst nightmare…
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Physics had a worrying amount of mathematics in it for me, but at least it was about something, which made it a bit easier to visualize. I always found mathematical concepts just sort of floated about in the ether.
Anyway, it sounds like we both bear the scars of our years at high school. 🙂
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😀 yes, that is very much evident…
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beautiful, I love the second stanza particularly, so much emotional depth.
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Thank you…that means a lot to me… 🙂
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wonderful 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂
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Wow Mani.. Very beautiful poem. Loved it. Last few lines of this poem are so awesome. ‘Memories flow, freeze, but they never evaporate.’ Loved this line. Have a great day Mani. 🙂
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I always think of in this way when it comes to memories. You ought to remember those which you want to forget most…memories are stubborn.. 🙂 Thanks a lot, Jackie…
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Yes. That’s very true Mani. Memories always remain as strange portals. 🙂
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Indeed… 🙂
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Wonderful poem.:)
Cheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
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Thanks…glad to see you here after a long time, Sri & Kri… 🙂
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That’s thought-provoking. And beautifully rendered.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Very beautiful!
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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A good start to my day with this beautiful poem. Like the frozen teardrops on cheeks, memories flow, freeze like but they do not evaporate. Sublime!
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Thanks a lot, Somali… ^_^
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WOW- This is deeply different poem with sincere words that brings joy and smile.
This is for you –
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Awww…<3 I'm so happy Mihran…you just made my day. Thanks a lot for this wonderful gift… ^_^ 🙂
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wow – your words are gift too:)
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Well said!
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🙂 ….thanks…
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Beautiful poem! Love how you describe memories. It’s so hard to forget them. Thought they might become a bit sketchy over time, the feeling they leave with us often never leaves 🙂
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Absolutely, Mabel…they never leave us..bad or beautiful, memories stick to us… Thanks for the wonderful comment, dear… 🙂
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such lovely words!!
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Thanks, Lynn… 🙂
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most welcome!
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This is so very true!
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Thanks…glad you liked…. ^_^
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I did, very much! You are welcome 🙂
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Happiness or sorrow, they never last for long but the memories stay there in the mind, frozen. A beautiful poem.
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Thanks…that is true with memories, indeed… 🙂
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Certainly quite the find 🙂
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Thank you…. ^_^
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☺️☺️
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