Ephemeral thoughts, illusion of the past
Disjointed memories waving at me as if
From a train pulling off slowly.
I wait,
With sadness and longing to be on board.
Once again.
Scattered happiness, bits and pieces
Jig-saw puzzles I failed to put rightly
Hazy dreams of mist and rain.
I got drenched,
In happiness as I stood
On the long lost highway.
scattered thoughts…scattered happiness… nice poem, ma’am
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Nostalgia never leaves us. It is directly proportional to age… 😀
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Ahh..like wine, directly proportional to age…
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Good example cited… 😀
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Thank you senora…cheers
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Short and sweet but touches every beat of my heart :*
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Thank you so much and, welcome to my blog…. 🙂 ❤
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One of the most interesting blogs ive read till now. I like the way you write. Your style. Mesmerizing. Loved it!
I write a little too. 😛
Might just read and tell me how you found it? :’)
https://mahekmithare.wordpress.com/
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Sure. Sorry for the late reply. Actually, akismet sent this to my spam folder 😦 don’t know why…
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Thats fine. I am glad you read my blog and found it good. Thank you. :’)
LOADS OF LOVE. 💕💕
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🙂 welcome…
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I’ve stayed in Calcutta for five years and reading this beautiful post brought back the nostalgia in such an overwhelming manner. Loved it.
Here’s hoping you’ll check out my blog too at https://thewhimsicalandwanderingsoul.wordpress.com/
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Thanks and welcome to my blog… 🙂
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Glad to hear
That nothing gets in the way 🙂
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Like wow.. Well put .. I somehow really like the sound of the word ‘nostalgia’
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Same here…. thanks, Jyotsna… 🙂
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wow… lovely 🙂
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Thanks, dear… 🙂
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Wow.. Very beautiful lines.. Loved this line, ‘Disjoint memories waving at me as if, from a train pulling off slowly’ Well written.. And the image is so pleasant.. Seems as if sky and the river are merging into one by removing the horizon.. Have a great day.. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Jackie for the good words…welcome to my virtual home… 🙂 Really glad you liked the picture and the words…
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You are welcome Maniparna.. It’s my pleasure to enter your virtual home.. 😉 And happy weekend.. 🙂
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🙂 ….
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I got drenched,
In happiness …. heaven!
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Thanks a lot…. 🙂
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Precious text. I love the picture with the two boats. It is minimalist.
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Thanks..so happy you liked the picture, coming from you, it means a lot… 🙂
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Fabulous!
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Thanks… 🙂
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Loved the way you connected the whole feelings with the concept of train. This is what I’ve been missing for a few days. Beautifully conceived, Maniparna 🙂
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I felt like that…memories waving and then passing silently by…:-)
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This poem is open from both sides with varied interpretations…each time I read it, it revealed a new aspect! It goes much far…nostalgia is so powerful!
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Yes, nostalgia is a strong, really strong feeling… 🙂 Thanks a lot, Balroop…
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Life is all about nostalgia isn’t it, and trust you to come up with such beautiful words in which one gets lost……
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It is, Leena…glad you liked my take… 🙂 ❤
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Made me smile.. So much purity in those scattered bits and pieces of the jigsaw. An equally serene photo to accompany the purity of nostalgia 🙂
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Thanks, Prateek..I always find your comments encouraging… 🙂
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Drenched in happiness and longing to be on board once again, says it all. So sweepingly nostalgic…
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Thanks a lot, Sir… Glad you like the lines… 🙂
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‘illusion of the past’ – a very interesting use here Maniparna….what we remember from the past is many times an interpretation, a perception….very thoughtful…..
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Thanks, Sunaina..and generally we tend to forget the bad memories remembering the good ones, our mind works in that way… 🙂
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right….I really loved the way you put it here….
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Really happy to know that… <3… 🙂
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so beautiful and clam 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Joshi… 🙂
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Love it. So sweet and poignant! There are reasons for silent seasons and lessons yet to be learned from the past and our feelings of nostalgia. I think of them like rainy days where as with the soil we just need to let things soak in as a way of nourishing us for the next pressing forward. Love and hugs, N 🙂 ❤
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Absolutely, Natalie… 🙂 I so loved the analogy of rain days and soil as monsoon is my favourite season… 🙂 Thank you so much….
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You’re welcome! 😊❤️
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A very sweet metaphor! Waving from a moving train!
Nostalgia is indeed a sweet and sad experience. It’s the refuge of an emotional and sensitive mind with long memories. Nothing is bitter across the rainbow. There’s simply a warp, which causes sad memories lose their sting and become funnier, whereas sweet memories develop that pang, causing us to yearn for them. Just like the longing of boarding that metaphorical train!
Very beautiful poem, Maniparna! 🙂
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Thanks, Rakesh… yes, the pangs of happiness, we may say… it keeps us reminding those moments we have lived to the fullest. Those yesterdays we yearn for and can trade our tomorrows…. 🙂
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Beautiful!! 💖💖
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Thanks… ❤ 🙂
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Beautiful! I can feel the longing to be on that train. Love the last line …the long lost highway… 🙂
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Thank you so much…glad you liked the lines…nostalgia is a strong feeling, isn’t it? 🙂 …..
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Yes, it sure is. It is good to take a moment to remember, though.
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🙂 always…
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Tender, beautiful writing, Maniparna
Thank You for this fine work
Big hugs
john
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Thanks for the encouraging words, John… 🙂
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Nostalgia makes me sad. You have described very beautifully.
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Very nice and beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. 🙂
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Thanks, Terry…glad you liked it… 🙂
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Wow I so love this!!!
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Thanks, Lynn… 🙂
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This was beautiful, melancholy and made me feel sentimental!
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Nostalgia is like that… it gives rise to a myriad of feelings… 🙂
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oh yes it does and you captured this well!
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🙂 ..glad you liked…
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🙂
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Unfortunately I can relate… until I got to the last two lines. Hoping that the last two lines will start come into focus soon.
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Thanks…glad you could relate. Nostalgia is a strong and universal feeling indeed… 🙂
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Strikes a chord with my post about time? Maybe?
Anyways, I always have this feeling so I can relate to this.
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Yes, wanna be a bit philosophical … 😛 Glad you could relate…. thank you… 😀
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So peaceful..like whispers along the lake 🙂
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Loved the description… Thanks, Andy… 🙂
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🙂
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Nice, I really like this one Maniparna.. Scattered happiness, disjointed memories – perfect description of nostalgia 🙂
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Thanks, Vinay… 🙂 nostalgia brings a sort of bitter-sweet feeling…
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Parting and the sadness associated with the train pulling off from the station and disappearing along the tracks, then gathering bits and pieces of happiness again denotes the reality of life. Beautifully penned Maniparna. 🙂
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Thank you, Somali. A part of life and though we all know it’s unreal, still, nostalgia is a strong feeling… 🙂
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So very true. At times we relish the feeling as well.
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🙂 Indeed….
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Calcutta! You can never be pulled away from the jhaal Mudi, rishkas, yellow cabs, howra bridge, addas, beguni, alta, laal para saari and ghats!
Love the picture 🙂
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Hehe…..you nailed it 🙂 Nostalgia is infectious… thanks, dear… 🙂
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Whistles!!!! This is soo beautiful Maniparna.. I could feel each line and word ❤ Beautifully put! Thank you so much for participating 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thanks a lot, Sanaa… so happy you liked it… 🙂
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