stone cold diamond drops
etched in the hearts of lush leaves
deflowered trees, beauty
Shared With Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. The Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Technique, this time, was “double entendre” with the theme as ‘cold’ or ‘coolness of the North’. A double entendre, as the name suggests, can have two meaning of which the one is usually risqué.
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hey soul-sis!! read it again . think i got the risque`part 😀
even if not , it IS beautiful !
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😛 Thanks, soul-sis..I think you got it!
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Wow, beautiful imagery ! Your words enliven the picture. 🙂
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Thank you so much, ma’am… glad you visited my blog and liked it… 🙂 Welcome here…
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Lovely, as usual 😊
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Thanks, Alok… 🙂
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I’ve been waiting for the few days for another meaning of the haiku as it is written for double entendre but………
Normally, I got many meanings but here, when it is mentioned that it is purposely written for dual meaning, I got stuck. Yuck!
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Oh yes! A bit risqué it is… 🙂 if one can get it… 🙂
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Oh, yes! It’s raw. You’re brave, Maniparna 🙂
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I was quite intrigued by the writing challenge. Tried hard to interpret something sensual in respect with Nature and came up with this. 🙂 This new technique is really interesting… 🙂
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Cold stone in the heart of lush leaves ..ah ! Painful.
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Deflowered yet beautiful. 🙂
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Superb lines..
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Wonderful Maniparna!
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Exquisite!
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Deflowered trees sounds so ambiguous.. love it.
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Absolutely beautiful!
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it must be heaven. i guess
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Beautiful snowfall. Brrr … How cold!
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the snow does look like diamonds … but sadly I am sad 🙂 because my garden looks a mess now with everything dieing because of cold …
brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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A beautiful Haiku.
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Stunning beauty!
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‘Stone cold diamond drops etched in the heart of leaves’ What could be a better way to describe the barren trees covered with snow? Beautiful!
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Gorgeous!
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Haiku about nature is the best!
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I can picture ice crystals on lush leaves. 🙂
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Gracias por la imagen y el poema. En Adelaide hoy día tenemos 40 grados y mañana serán 45 Mirarar su foto es un descanso para mi alma Saludos
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There is a beauty in winter as it infuses nature. Lovely haiku
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Beautiful poetry and imagery~
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