The watery mirror
Still, without any ripple
Stifled and stilted
Holding the sky
Yet, the sense
Claustrophobic
A mind, without waves.
Scattered Thoughts
Welcome to my world, a tapestry of thoughts and forms conceived in my mind
Scattered Thoughts 
your choice of title has enhanced the beauty and provided depth to the words dear .. You must have excelled tremendously in those ‘Give a title ‘ contest which my teachers used to love so much 🙂
A beautiful piece 🙂 🙂
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Hehe… thanks, soul-sis. You have covered all my posts written in your absence 😀 The posts really await your wonderful comments… 🙂
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That is what the mind has to be.
Conveying it in style.
GoooooooD !!!!!
Shiva
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Thanks, glad you liked it… 🙂
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It is impossible to hold the infinity in the crook of a pond
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Nice.
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Thanks so much…:-) Great to see you after a long time..hope you are doing fine… 🙂
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Yes thank you. Hope you are doing well too?
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Thanks, all is well here, too… thanks for asking, dear… 🙂
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🙂
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You are taking us into deep .. and still … waters here! Great reflection and picture.
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Thank you so much. Glad you find both the picture and the words appreciable… 🙂
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Lovely piece about peace! 🙂
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😀 Thanks…
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Wonder, the way you get that fluidic flow everytime…seems your nib gets a spooky inertia…..Amazing!
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Oh! Thanks so much Susmit…that really made my day..:-P
How are you doing?
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wow what a sensation you have put into words
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Thanks…glad you liked it… 🙂
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Have always thought that your words make the pictures even better… I loved this one too 🙂
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Thanks a lot, dear… 🙂
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It is indeed a beautiful concoction of words and images…water without waves and watery mirror, mind without waves, each choice of word is a deep reflection of inner thoughts and together it holds deeper meaning of life and living…the thought of claustrophobic, is against the very philosophy of freedom of life, we all want to break free and want to fly and hold the sky…
Hope you are having a serene weekend.
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Your words are always so profound, Nihar. The interpretation is wonderful, as always…. 🙂 it resonates with my thoughts as well..thanks a lot for such a nice comment…. 🙂
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My pleasure and have a lovely weekend.
😀
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I always love your writings, you have a way of taking something simple and giving it so much depth. You’re very reflective haha you see what I did there!
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Hehe…. 😀 Thanks so much Ste J…as you know, your words make me smile..always… 🙂
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love it especially the last line!
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Thanks so much Neha… 🙂
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Deep meanings here, and I love the image – it feels like looking at painting! Well done, Maniparna!
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Thanks, Indah…I loved the picture, too..a very simple one though… 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thankss… 🙂
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Beautiful Maniparna :).. The last lines add a new sense and angle to the poem 🙂
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Hehe..that was what it meant for… 😛 Thanks, Vinay… 🙂
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Why is your mind without waves? Is it calm or stagnant? Both have a different meaning, I believe.
Well your words never fail to amaze me. 🙂
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Thanks… 🙂
This is not my mind…just a general perception. My mind acts over time… 😛 full of hell lot of ideas, but I’m too lazy to execute them… 😀
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You are a machine, who churns out creativity. 😛 You are unaffected by the worldly sorrows or emotions. Every other day you write a haiku or a poem or a book review or a product review.
You really are something 😛
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Aare kuchh to likhna padega na ..to keep the blog moving 😀
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Come on!
We mortals get affected by emotions and daily problems, you are so much above us. 😛 I wonder if I could learn a thing or two from you. 🙂
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I’ve lots of problems. Today is 15th August and my maids are absent… problem hi problem. But, yes, an hour or two, that I coax out from my lines of daily chores… 🙂
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You manage your problems pretty well. No problems would affect you 😛
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Oh! What good words..I’m really elated… 😛 😀
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Well, I am only being honest 🙂
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Beautiful interpretation of the picture, Maniparna.
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Thanks so much, Saru… 🙂
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Sorry not haiku, the poem.
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🙂 noted…
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What a choice of words and image, and how true it is! A mind that doesn’t allow the expansion of waves like the vessel, would stifle imagination. I loved this haiku to the bits.
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Thanks, Somali..that’s the essence of the lines… 🙂
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That’s a lovely capture!
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Thank you… 🙂 glad you liked it…
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Love your words Maniparna, “a mind without waves.”
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Thanks so much, Mary…have a lovely weekend ahead… 🙂
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Thank you Maniparna – the same to you for a wonderful weekend.
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Very lovely reflection. Picture and words
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Thank you… 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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I wonder, this made me really wonder, what a mind without waves would be like…. Perfect thought.
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It might be as stagnant as the water of a well… 🙂 Thanks so much, dear… 🙂
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Lovely image and poetry
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Thanks a lot, Alka… 🙂
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