Each line is so well thought and speaks so many volumes about a feeling that is always hard to express. It is the only thing vision adorned – so very true. An ‘eternal’ piece in true sense this is 🙂
I really mean it. 😛 This is awesome.
Just look at these lines, ‘The magic of an intangible force
The end meeting the source’.
Don’t you feel it’s divine? I am so amazed after reading this.
What a beautiful way to define love! Profane yet pious, sweeter than the sound of wind chime and transcending the barriers of time. 🙂 Could we have asked for more?
Different indeed. I was wondering how can a flower lead your thoughts to so many different directions. Justifies the name of the blog, Scattered thoughts 🙂
Hope eternal and temporary. There is a beautiful balance to this one Maniparna, the evanescence and the permanence of eternity. Really liked this one 🙂
Yet another beauty! Great work my friend ❤ For some reason all the poems have not been coming on my reader! 😦 glad I came by 🙂
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Thanks so much, Neha… 🙂 so happy you liked it…. 🙂
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Each line is so well thought and speaks so many volumes about a feeling that is always hard to express. It is the only thing vision adorned – so very true. An ‘eternal’ piece in true sense this is 🙂
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I’m so very humbled by your generous words, Prateek 🙂 means a lot to me…. such words from a poet like you… 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Divine! I am amazed! How do you write so well? 😀
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Hehe…look who is talking! … 😀
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I really mean it. 😛 This is awesome.
Just look at these lines, ‘The magic of an intangible force
The end meeting the source’.
Don’t you feel it’s divine? I am so amazed after reading this.
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Thanks, Namrata… I’m really honoured..I’m a great fan of your writing, too… 🙂
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Beautiful! I loved how the poem ended, encompassing the entire meaning.
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Thanks so much..:-)
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Simple and simply BEAUTIFUL! I love it! 🙂
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Thanks, so glad you liked it… 🙂
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What a beautiful poem!
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Thanks, my friend… 🙂
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What a beautiful way to define love! Profane yet pious, sweeter than the sound of wind chime and transcending the barriers of time. 🙂 Could we have asked for more?
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Indeed, love heals every wound…a magic potion it is… 🙂 thank you… 🙂
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Absolutely brilliant:)
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Thanks, Vishal… 🙂
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Wow… such a superb piece… this is beautiful… 🙂 beautiful words here… 🙂
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Thankssss… ❤ 😀
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Different indeed. I was wondering how can a flower lead your thoughts to so many different directions. Justifies the name of the blog, Scattered thoughts 🙂
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Hehe..flowers always inspire me..the nature as a whole, in fact… 🙂 Thanks, Anoop… 🙂
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You are a flower person. 🙂 I know that by now. 😛
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Hehee…:-D 😛
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you… 🙂
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Hope eternal and temporary. There is a beautiful balance to this one Maniparna, the evanescence and the permanence of eternity. Really liked this one 🙂
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Thanks for a short and precise analysis… 🙂
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Beautifully written. Each para has different message. Love them all 🙂
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Thanks Ravish…means a lot… 🙂
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Gorgeous imagery!
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Thank you..so happy you liked it… 🙂
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Wonderful, beautiful poem. My fave part:
“Sweeter than the sound of wind chime
Gossamer of love transcends time”
What a lovely rhyme 🙂
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Glad you love the rhyming…it’s my fav, too..:-) thanks…
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