Some words, untold
Some dreams, unseen
Thoughts; like leaves
Strewed the path
Making way for
Friendship, not made.
Hope; like flowers
Is spreading fragrance
Of happiness, unfelt.
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Scattered Thoughts 
thoughts strewn on the path..so well penned!
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Thanks dear… 🙂
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The last word ”unfelt’ has raised the appeal of the poem exponentially. Precise and lovely piece of work 🙂
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Thanks…glad you liked the use of the word… 🙂
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Great contrasting feelings.
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Thanks… 🙂
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There’s a curious balance here between desire/promise and unfulfillment. I would live in the enticing smell for a while, conjuring the dream with my jumbled thoughts.
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Your comment is a poetry by itself, Susan. So glad you liked the poem and, thanks for the wonderful comment… 🙂
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loved the use of words .. conflict , as life is .. untold, unfelt , not made , unseen ..
life is well, unfair .. and you have just made that unfair-ness beautiful ..
LOVED it Mani !!
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Aww, that’s such a lovely comment dear…. made me just happy happy 😀
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You lead the reader down the path (of life) with expectancy and you place bits of resonating conflict (untold, unseen, not made, unfelt.)
Well written !!!!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it… 🙂
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and a beautiful heart of a poet can feel all these:)
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Aww…that’s so nice of you to say…thank you… 🙂
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I like the possibility and the potential in this 🙂
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Thanks …life is all about that… 🙂
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i like how hope spreads like fragrance
My Brain is a Cheap Gadget That Spins
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Thanks a lot… welcome to my blog… 🙂
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As always, such a deep thought so beautifully expressed ! I think I may sound very repetitive but your words provide so much food for thought. The imagery of thoughts lying like leaves, Hope spreading fragrance like flowers – Mesmerizing way to convey your thoughts. 🙂
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Thanks…you are too generous with your words. 😀 But it feels really nice when someone appreciates….it’s the driving force for all, I think… 🙂
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I like the idea that hope spreading fragrance of happiness! Very nice poem all around.
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Thanks a lot Mary… 🙂
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So beautiful!
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Thanks Sherry… 🙂
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this reminds of those poems where what is not said is the actual motif
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Thank you so much and, welcome to my blog… 🙂
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Beautiful poem. It made me feel sad to think of paths not taken, love not fulfilled, dreams not realized. But this is truth, perhaps for everyone to some degree. Good writing!
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Thanks Myrna, yes, that’s life…full of contrasts and contradictions… 🙂
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Wonderful thoughts of hope like flowers…wishing they come to you soon!
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Thanks so much…glad you liked the lines… 🙂
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Oh I wish the happiness would be felt soon .. very soon.
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Thank you…I hope so, too… 🙂
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beautiful, yet somewhat sad, how some things never happen, are never felt, never made..
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Thanks…life is like this…. 🙂
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Beautiful as usual
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Beautiful how you weave the words and let the reader take the meaning that touches them. Wonderful writing.
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Thanks Mary, your words are pure kindness…. 🙂
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thoughts made of beauty…
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Thanks Sumanadi… 🙂
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Absolutely stunning ❤
Loved the flow of verse 🙂
xoxo
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Thanks a lot Sanaa, so happy you liked it…and, welcome to my virtual home, my blog… 🙂
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Very enjoyable and a wonderful photo to accompany your words. Your poetry is something I love to sink into and contemplate.
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Thanks so much for such wonderful and inspiring words. 🙂 …. Surely, it will motivate me to write better…. 🙂
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I am pleased if I could motivate you in any way, it’s always wonderful joining another writer’s journey and in turn being inspired to try and improve my own writing.
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Indeed…very well said… 🙂
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Contrast. 🙂 Very well portrayed.
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Thank you Anoop… 🙂
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Some dreams, yet to realize (unseen)?
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Sort of… 🙂 There are some dreams we dare not to conceive in our minds….
Thanks for dropping by…
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wow..! this explains your poem much better to me (there are some dreams we dare not to conceive in our minds….)
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🙂 Thanks…
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Beautiful words and lyrical quality of your expressive verse wonderfully
portray the life force .Best wishes for LIFE.
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Thank a lot, Sir for your wonderful comment and the wish. Wish you the same and, welcome to my blog… 🙂
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Beautiful words and lyrical quality of you expressive verse wonderfully
portray the life force .Best wishes for LIFE.
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Poignant yet beautiful 🙂
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Thanks , dear… ❤
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Beautiful Maniparna. I love your longer versions and how well you weave the beauty of life into it. The unexpected turns, the bends and the look at a new horizon, all to the beauty of life..
PS: I like the new theme on the blog, very pleasing to the eye and the readability is really cool.. 🙂
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Thanks Vinay, you’ve beautifully explained the lines…. 🙂
Glad to know it. I was really anxious about it….thanks for your feedback… 😀
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🙂 it’s really nice Maniparna ..
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Thankssss…. 😀
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So nice poem !
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Thanks so much… 🙂
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How true that thoughts sow the seeds and pave the way for emotions, dreams, words, actions, and relations. The comparison of thoughts with leaves strewing the path forward is beautiful.
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Thank you… 🙂 Nice to know that you liked the images drawn with words…. 🙂
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Delving into what’s not, and perhaps what could have been? Really like the perspective. And really like the new blog layout! 🙂
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Thanks Ami…. glad you liked the both… 😀
I watched the prog… super-awesome!!!! (y)
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Oh you did… awesome to know that! 🙂
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Beautiful verse Maniparna. And I am loving the new look of your blog.
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Thanks Saru…. 🙂 great to know that the new look is quite pleasing… 🙂
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Absolutely correct about life, hard to fathom at times.
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Indeed…thanks Alok… 🙂
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Nice choice of words but written in a contrasting manner. That’s life after all 🙂
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Yes, full of contrasts… Thanks Uma… 🙂
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Beautiful dear and deep… ❤ life will always be beautiful… its how we see it… 🙂
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It all depends on one’s perspectives…right you are…thanks dear… 🙂 ❤
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Sometime these lovely words makes us feel so nostalgic and we get lost in the flow of it’s profound meaning. Indeed some words untold and some dreams unseen…life is a beauty.
We don’t see it…but many times we feel it.
😀
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True, we can feel the life…the beauty of it as it unfolds itself to us…. 🙂 Thanks Nihar for the beautiful comment… 🙂
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