The boy was returning home from the field when suddenly the azure sky started changing its colour. Within a few minutes, the azuline changed to aubergine and, then, atrous. The trees stopped nodding their heads in the wind; the chattering of the birds ceased as if Nature was setting the stage for its final presentation.
The eerie silence of the surrounding….. the untimely evening as it was quickly covering the earth, informed him of the imminent catastrophe.
The brave, little kid raised his small fists up to the sky and shouted,”I’m not afraid, I’ll reach home safely…” he paused and muttered, “alone”.
His father and some other people were looking for him. They were shouting, but little could be heard over the deafening thunder. The lightning struck again and, one of them found the boy; sitting under a tree, face buried in his knees.
It started raining and, no one noticed his tears.
I’ve been tagged by Vishal to take part in the Five Photos Five Stories (FPFS). The challenge works like that: You post a picture for five consecutive days and attach a post to it, fiction, poem or short write-up. It can be anything that suits your taste. I am also tagging my good friend, Anoop on Day Three, as part of the challenge, I will tag a new person on Day Four.
Ghanghor 🙂
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Wow! you set quite a scene there! 🙂
Great job.
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Well written.
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The description of the night stole my heart….rest was icing on the cake 🙂 superb!!
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Aww..thanks so much babe… feeling happy with your compliment… ❤ 🙂
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Very beautifully worded.
…and what a terrific capture to go with it!
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Thanks so much Amit ji….. means a lot… 🙂
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Aww the poor little boy!
I love when the sky looks like that!!! In fact, the recent short story on my blog (The Grey Building…) was written on a day when the sky looked pretty much like in your pic.
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both the story and photo touch the heart
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wonderful story and picture 🙂
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Very nicely written.
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Very nice post…!
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Nice one dearie… I like the boy for his brave act… 🙂
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Liked reading the story Maniparna. The lil boy was surely brave to face the dark sky and the thundering clouds.
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Might have been a great tension for the Little Boy for a while…. But Mother Nature is equally kind…. With all Love, She nicely taught him something else too….
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Nice story to the challenge 🙂 Btw, it is raining at Kolkata too? 😀
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Yes 😀 It just rained accompanied by thunder and lightning…. a cool relief and I LOVE rain… 😀
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Rain is so haiku and challenge inspiring 😀
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Yes, I find the raindrops really blissful… 😀 perhaps I’ll write something tonight 😀
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May there be a lot of rain bliss tonight 😀
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Eh..not lot of…. that will definitely lead to a power cut or slower-than-snail internet…
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So the situation is just the same at all parts of India 😀
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Unity in diversity… 😛
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Now we know what exactly that means 😛
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The little boy was certainly a brave one ! The words goes so well with the image ..specially where you changed the colours of the sky ..
loved the skill dear 🙂
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Thanks soul-sis 😀 …. It feels great to have compliments from you… 🙂
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The story and the image are completing each other! Sometimes I do feel intimidated by thunder storm, I hope he will get over it 🙂
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Thanks, Indah… we all have felt intimidated by thunderstorms at some point of time. The boy will surely forget the incident… 🙂
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Not only your Haikus,your short stories are fab too 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Poor child, do wonder the reactions of the grownups when they found him. It will be a long time I suppose before he forgets this experience of being in the middle of a thunder storm. Interesting story ~
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Yes, children often get afraid of the thunderstorms… 😦
Thanks Mary for the beautiful comment… I feel honoured… 🙂
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Poor little guy. Wonderful story, Maniparna. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Elizabeth…so glad you liked it… 🙂
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