35 responses to “End”

1. “End to reborn”. Very powerful words! Underlines life indeed is a cycle!

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   • Thanks..glad that you liked the lines.. 🙂

     Welcome to my blog… 🙂

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2. An imaginative one dear and I loved the graphical nature of it.. ” shadow mocking her…none but she and the house …”
   And the last line is meaningful, true,positive and philosophical 🙂
   contemplative 🙂

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3. Great imagery, your writing is magic today as love and hope hangs in the air.

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   • Thanks so much…it’s such an inspiring comment… 🙂

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4. Beautifully said, Maniparna. Inspiring as always 🙂

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   • Thanks so much … 🙂

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5. असल में जो अंत ही वही शुरुआत भी है … अच्छी पोइट्री …

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   • Well said Sir, the end is the new beginning… 🙂 Thanks and welcome to my blog… 🙂

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6. End of something is the beginning of other. Liked the concept. Very profound indeed. 🙂

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   • Thanks a lot Ravish…great to know you liked the concept… 🙂

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7. The opening is thrilling “the chair sits alone” and the entire poem is simply suuuuuuuperb! 🙂

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   • Thanks dear… 🙂

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8. Love and hope, two most profound words, wonderfully played with two more powerful words…mind and thought…

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   • Thanks Nihar for the thoughtful comment…just wanted to convey that there is nothing like an absolute end…love and hope, even when are far-fetched, can help anyone to end the end…. 🙂

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9. Friends are good to have in goid times As well as in bad times We are richly blessed each and everyday that we can wake up is a wonderful blessing .Life is also a wonderful blessing to make new friends every where .

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   • Very well said 🙂 Friends are always a blessing… thanks for your wonderful comment…

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10. Nice play of words, intrinsically emphasizing the importance of love and hope.

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    • Thanks a lot Alok for your nice comment… 🙂

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11. Wow this is refreshing. Nice idea, though tested and tried by people before, I really liked it 🙂

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    • Thank you… 😀

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12. superb! loved this. can imagine the whole setup with your words!

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    • Thanks dear….. great to know you liked the words… 🙂

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13. The black backdrop so aptly adds to the mood of the poem. A seamless creation★

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    • Thanks Susmit. Happy to know that the idea of black backdrop worked… 😀

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14. What a powerful poem! And beautifully visually presented. Though the subject is sad, the poem in its whole strikes an oddly peaceful note…

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    • It’s really an honour to have you on my blog. Glad to know that the subtle note of hope had made you happy 🙂 Thanks for the wonderful comment…. 🙂

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      • The pleasure is all mine!

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      • 🙂

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15. Beautifully expressed Maniparna. It’s truly all in our mind – love and hope.
    Thanks and regards.

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    • Thanks for dropping by Dilip… 🙂

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16. My latest entry with D for A to Z challenge is on same theme, Mani 🙂 U and I were thinking on same line at some time.. Nice lines..

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    • Oh! That’s great Roohi..will definitely read your post. Most of the times I agree with your points …so this time, it seems, our though waves have worked together 😀

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17. Waiting to be reborn. The thought is endearing. You have painted a vivid picture with your words Maniparna.

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    • Thanks a lot… a subtle note of hope…I wanted to convey… 🙂

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