Dissecting the heart
Raw emotions.
Tainted feelings
Leery of getting hurt.
Unseen bondage
Invisible load
Heavy as lead.
A scalding wave
Gnawing from within
Making everything
Throbbing yet dead.
Scattered Thoughts 
Throbbing yet dead… Loved it!
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Bienvenue dans le monde du Cancer, ce crabe hideux …!!!
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Such emotion in your words….loved it!!
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Thank you so much and, welcome to my blog 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Wow .. Powerful !
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Thanks Ankur… 🙂
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Too good.
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Striking verse and nicely used image 🙂
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Thanks Teny… 😀
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Tangible is the pain in this piece.
Her sorrow
Running to catch the tears
escape through fingers
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It’s beautiful! You’ve expressed that tangible pain so nicely in the haiku. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful comment 🙂
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When it hurts the heart deep, scars it…its sorry and sometimes no antidote helps overcome it, one is sorrowed forever!
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Right Shweta… tried to portray the feeling….
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“A scalding wave gnawing from within” – powerfully descriptive. Nicely done, Maniparna!
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Thanks Beloo, glad you liked it… 🙂
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I often go through this.. It scares me what will happen to me if real pain strikes..
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It scares us all Roohi, hope none of us of us ever faces such pain and sorrow… 🙂
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Yes sometimes it can feel like that!
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Very powerful indeed!
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Wow maniparna.
Well written.
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Beautiful!
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your blog is awesome … you should shift to ur self hosted wordpress and add up google adsense … anyways keep up the good work and thanx for sharing .
regards :- http://www.loloholic.com
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Wow, so beautifully penned Mani.. Hats off..
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Thanks Utpal..glad you liked it… 🙂
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Oops
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😀
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Too poetical…. Well said!
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Thank you Sirji… 🙂
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When sorrow engulfs then everything seems dead and petrified even id it is still breathing!
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Absolutely… it’s a dark and heavy feeling…
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Beatifully penned!~ All the best to you!, Aquileana 😀
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Thank you so much 😀
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The emotion is brilliantly conveyed!
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Thanks so much… 🙂
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It’s the description of pain a butterfly goes through while coming out of cocoon and after that a whole new world of happiness 🙂
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The pain and suffering sometimes become heavy to carry…. thanks for sharing your views Ravish… 🙂
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So deep, strong and powerful. I can feel the sorrow…*hugs*
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Thanks dear…..your comment always makes me happy..:-) ❤
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Very illustrative of that marvellous image.
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Thanks .. 🙂
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Its too raw to handle ! Intense and scalding …. almost tangible !
Kudos girl , what else 🙂
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Without your opinion, I feel I’m missing something… 🙂
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One word- Powerful Maniparna 🙂
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Thanks a lot Shashank… 🙂
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Few lines but powerful message !
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Thanks Uma… 🙂
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Pain does have a weight and feeling beyond the physical..i can feel it here..i hope it lifts…
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Yes, we all hope so… 🙂 thanks for dropping by Jae… 🙂
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Fantastic, Maniparna! “invisible load, heavy as lead” I could feel the weight of that powerful line on my shoulders. xo
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Thanks a lot Elizabeth… your comment made my day… ❤ 🙂
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love the raw emotion in it… 🙂
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Thanks dear… 🙂
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extremely moving.
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🙂 …
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Powerful..but hope you are alright..
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Yes, I’m alright 😀 thanks for the concern dear…. 🙂
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The poem with the pic…just perfect !
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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deep and poignant… you have read my thoughts… beautiful one… 🙂
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It always feels so nice to hear from you dearie… 🙂 thanks a lot… 🙂
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Thank you for sharing your talent… 🙂 i wish you well dear… 🙂
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I can feel the heaviness of the load in this poem. So many carry “invisible burdens”.
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It’s really ‘invisible’ …but hope replaces the burden…that’s our life-force… 🙂
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There is strength in this piece! ‘Throbbing yet dead’ is excellent imagery.
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Thanks so much Mary… 🙂
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The way our skin grow thick and we grow careful and desentized – so sad when we shut out the thing that could give a blessings of love,
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Indeed… Thanks for sharing your views… 🙂
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It is amazing what we find as we dissect our hearts from many joyful and painful encounters…
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Yes, it’s always amazing..for all of us…
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Powerful words conveying emotions. and hurt 🙂 Nice poem. I can’t even think of writing something like this.
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Thanks, Anoop… 😀
and thanks again for being soooo humble… 😛 ..you’re great in weaving words… 😀
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Not being humble 😛 Aapke utna great toh hum kabhi nahi ho sakte, chahe kitna bhi koshish kar lo 🙂
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Now, it’s super-humble… 😀
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lol. You are very kind with your words 🙂
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😀 not at all…
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That’s modesty at it’s best.
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LOL…. 😀
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🙂
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I believe we still can heal our
‘Tainted feelings’ with positive thoughts….
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We can and this belief is a strong force for all of us… 🙂 Thanks for dropping by…
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we have to be careful that our fear of getting hurt does not insulate us from the opportunity of love….because that will eat away at us…
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Well said Brian. I think love is a much much stronger emotion and it conquers all… 🙂
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