Singing with the murmuring of water
Dancing with the waves in a desultory fashion
Playing with the wind as it moves on
In love with solitude, life is lively.
Idleness they call it. Wise morons
Running to catch the time, wayfarer
Time shall not be triumphant with me
I watch my reflection in the water,
Stirred, shaken, lost.
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Eta pakka Di/Pu/Bok er maal… gondho ta thik pelam ki? 😛
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Hehe..eTa Chandipur, Odisha… 😀
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Accha
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This race with time, its high time we Win. Time shall not not be triumphant… So true..
Loved the lines Maniparna!!
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Thanks so much for the appreciation 🙂 …
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Lovely flow of words Maniparna.
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Thanks Indrani… 🙂
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beautiful poem! 🙂
More interesting to see that there are 8 lines and 40 comments! U r a celebrity haha 😀
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Thank you and welcome to my blog 🙂
Not a celebrity..the fact is I’ve a few friends who love me a lot 😀
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Nicely expressed…. Wishes!
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Thanks Sir 🙂 wishes to you too….
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I am a loner and can so relate to what you have written, loved the oxymoron wise morons. I have nominated you for the very inspiring blog award 🙂
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Wow! that’s great Shweta… when such awards come a dear friend, it means a lot… ❤ 🙂
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“In love with solitude, life is lively” – This is a beautiful line, Maniparna! And oh, the picture – extraordinary! Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks so much Beloo.. glad you liked the poem… 🙂
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Awesome Maniparna, your choice of picture for this post is awesome…
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Thanks so much Alok..the picture was taken in Chandipur, Odisha… 🙂
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That’s a beautiful poem Maniparna. The sentiment echoes with me too.
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Thanks Kalpanaa 🙂
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“Self-proclaimed wise” morons, aren’t they? 😀
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YES, you got it right! 😛 😀
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Idleness they call it. Wise morons. Ha ha very nicely put up 🙂
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Thanks dear… 🙂
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shaken, stirred, enjoyed 🙂
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Thanks… ❤ 🙂
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‘wise morons’ …. very well put
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Thank you… 🙂
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Love the take on time. Neither fast nor slow but go hand in hand with time …though cliched it is how it works 🙂
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Thanks Uma…glad you like the thought… 🙂
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I particularly liked this bit: “Time shall not be triumphant with me”. To stop being affected by time and living life on one’s own terms sound wonderful. 🙂
-HA
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Thanks… you’ve touched the right chord! this line is my personal favourite 🙂
Welcome to my digital house…my blog 🙂
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Can write praise for your beautiful words Mani, but feeling nicely amused and satisfied by your term ‘wise morons’ 😛 😛 😛 Ha HA HA …. and yes Thanks to Biswadarshan Mohanty for the phrase..Ah! Dolce far niente … wah-wah .. In Leisure perpetually 🙂
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Hehe..I loved the phrase too 😀
And you knwo, there are really some people who didn’t have the time to stop for a moment, to look up at the blue sky or to hear to the cuckoo’s song…I pity them..really… 🙂
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Did this piece non-existed 🙂
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I love the line about being in love with solitude and, especially, the “wise morons”!!!!!
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Thanks a lot Sherry…. glad you love it… 🙂
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There really is so much to be learned through looking at reflections! Perhaps there is no more greater learning than what is reflected back! Happy New Year to you.
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Thanks..what we see in the reflection is always so clear and true ! well said Mary… 🙂
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Are those wise morons even aware what they miss in the reflections… sometimes you have to sit there and inhale the truth..
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Exactly…. well said. Thank you… 🙂
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I especially loved these lines:
Playing with the wind as it moves on
In love with solitude, life is lively.
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Thanks…glad you find the lines appreciable 🙂
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In love with solitude, life is lively….
for some this might sound impossible.. but the ones who love their own company will truly cherish this..
beautifully woven!
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Thanks..there is always a calm happiness in solitude..I can feel it 🙂
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right word used “morons” running to catch time …
beautiful
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Thanks Bikram… 😀
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Dolce far niente, Italians would call it, art of doing nothing. 🙂
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Thanks for teaching me this Italian phrase ..love it…. 😀
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Always welcome…:)
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Tell the wise morons that a quiet mind in love with solitude is not the same as an idle mind. 🙂
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Yes, hopefully they will understand it one day… 🙂
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Wise morons 😛
Very well put together. 🙂
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😛 thank you…
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“People say nothing is impossible, but I do nothing every day.”
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Haha..so very well said ! 🙂
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