Beautiful lines of your adds value to the picture Maniparna. Your haiku poems are really amazing.
Meanwhile, I tagged you in my post http://creatikaa.blogspot.in/2014/12/my-college-dairyi.html. Expecting your opinion and participation..
Loved the expression of pouring the colour in to the barren white land… akin to pouring life into a desolate dormant being…. and that too while dying itself … loved it Mani 🙂 Its lines like this which stay with me for along time .. perhaps forever …
Thanks Kokila….I’ll remember your ‘golden braids’ forever..it’s one of those lines which made me think..’wish I would’ve written this’ …. 🙂 you’ve a golden hand indeed when it comes to writing…
It’s a brilliant picture. Such a beautiful colour combination, Looks like an art done with extra patience. It’t tough to match words to a picture like this and Maniparna you have written a nice Haiku which higlights the grief of such a beautiful thing.
Season exodus, what better you to express than the depiction of those last few leaves tantalizing dangling from the branches….solitary makes it more pronounced. Lovely picture…
Burning the brightest before it breathes its last.
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Spectacular! The expression completed the beauty of the picture! 🙂
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Very nice picture 🙂 And the last one to fall, after fall will be alone 🙂
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After the last leaf falls…it’s emptiness…
Thanks Ash for dropping by… 🙂
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What a beautiful capture and such lovely words to match the mood!
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Stunning capture dear….Loved it….:)
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Thank you… 🙂
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Did you click it yourself?? Omg! Beautiful Maniparna 😊
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No Shruti…the photo courtesy is there… 🙂 thanks for dropping by….
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Oops sorry, I think I am growing old! 😉
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Hehehe…no way… you’re such a glamorous young lady… 🙂
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He he thank you Maniparna!
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Welcome dear… 🙂
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Lovely lines, Maniparna. 🙂
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Thanks so much… 🙂
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This reminds me of the story by O Henry, The Last Leaf! :).
Nice one Maniparna 🙂
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Yes… you got it right… somewhat inspired by that…. 🙂
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Meaningful words
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Wonderful…
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Thanks … 🙂
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Great lines for the pic.
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Thanks Indrani…
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Beautiful lines of your adds value to the picture Maniparna. Your haiku poems are really amazing.
Meanwhile, I tagged you in my post http://creatikaa.blogspot.in/2014/12/my-college-dairyi.html. Expecting your opinion and participation..
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lovely
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Thanks… 🙂
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Loved the expression of pouring the colour in to the barren white land… akin to pouring life into a desolate dormant being…. and that too while dying itself … loved it Mani 🙂 Its lines like this which stay with me for along time .. perhaps forever …
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Thanks Kokila….I’ll remember your ‘golden braids’ forever..it’s one of those lines which made me think..’wish I would’ve written this’ …. 🙂 you’ve a golden hand indeed when it comes to writing…
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This is one of those little gems of poetry that makes me glad to be part of this writing community. Thank you!
The Way Out
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Thank you so much for such an inspiring comment… 🙂 I’m feeling happy…
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It’s a brilliant picture. Such a beautiful colour combination, Looks like an art done with extra patience. It’t tough to match words to a picture like this and Maniparna you have written a nice Haiku which higlights the grief of such a beautiful thing.
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You’ve described the whole thing so beautifully dear…the essence of both the picture and the haiku… 🙂 ❤
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such a vibrant image. I was thinking that today as I watched the last of fall’s color fade. Glorious words
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“pours itself into emptiness”
What a fantastic image!
Exodus
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thanks 🙂 ..
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Last leaf; looks like lootera (bollywood) movie’s climax. But your words are very beautiful as usual.
Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Yes..and O’Henry’s “Last leaf” too..Lootera was inspired by that one… 😀 Thank you so much Anoop… 🙂
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Oh, very nicely done!
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Thanks so much… 🙂
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Beautifully done!
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Thank you so much Dolores… 🙂
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Season exodus, what better you to express than the depiction of those last few leaves tantalizing dangling from the branches….solitary makes it more pronounced. Lovely picture…
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Thanks Nihar, you’ve nicely expressed my lines ….wonderful… 🙂
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pretty!
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Thanks… 🙂
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There’s a reason the Exodus story has inspired so many Americans. It’s a narrative of hope.
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It’s a story of hope and exudes a sense of departure and leaving simultaneously….thank you so much for sharing your views… 🙂
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