54 responses to “Haiku : Death”

1. Excellent! I loved this one!

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   • Thanks a lot… 🙂

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2. Reblogged this on Reviews & Recommendations and commented:
   Haunting description, eternal silence.

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3. Good one

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4. Ah, the beauty of your words! 🙂

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5. Loved it. Especially the unfinished note and eternal silence. Beautiful, Maniparna. 🙂

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6. Awesome one ..:) Sounds good. Thanks for sharing this.

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7. wonderful lines there Maniparna… loved all the three 🙂 Even death is an inspiration here 😉

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8. Good one Maniparna.

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9. Spooky.. It is indeed as if the soul is leaving the body.. Fab shot.. Rajesh

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10. This poem kinda reminds me of the last scene from the movie anand.. very touching 🙂

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11. Profound lines..

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12. Sometimes I wonder who will finish the unfinished note of my life?

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13. This is one of the best Haikus I have read in a long time!

    Cheers,
    Ankush.

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14. This is my favourite one from now on 🙂 Lovely death, end of a melody, only the beginning 😀

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15. Superb. What made you write that?

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    • Actually there was a prompt, ” Death-poem” from one of the haiku community….I composed the haiku on that prompt 🙂

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16. Hi, long time no see. So what is Haiku, forgive my ignorance. Do you come up with the theme too?

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    • Hi Sweety,

      Haiku is a Japanese poetic form traditionally consists of 3 lines and 17 syllables in the order of 5-7-5. There are many other aspects though..you can see here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

      Thanks a lot for dropping by and really it feels nice to have comments from friends. 🙂

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17. Wow Maniparna what a wonderful Jisei you share here … very nice and that last line … just gorgeous …

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    • Thank you so much Kristijaan…great to know you like it… 🙂

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18. Wow. Love that.

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    • Thank you..and thanks for the tweet too… 🙂

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19. I love the haiku and I don’t think I’ve ever read any that strikes such a chord with my emotions as yours, Maniparna. Thank you.

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    • Thanks for dropping by Elizabeth… great to know that you find it in tune with your emotions… 🙂

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20. Perfect … love you metaphor of music in this haiku.

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    • Thank you so much… 🙂

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21. U are so good at haiku … Can’t even imagine something on death 😔

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    • Thanks a lot dear… 🙂

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22. Brilliant! I always find haiku is super difficult to create, you made it so easy and beautiful to read too.

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    • Thanks Indah for your great words of appreciation… 🙂

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23. I like it! One that makes me feel as if written for my husband…. how I would feel at his passing.

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    • Oh ! I don’t know Dolores how I should react on your comment….it made be sad but still happy that you’ve find such resemblance with your emotions and feelings through my words…

      Thanks so much for dropping by…

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24. And this time the second line of your haiku is awesome.I don’t think anybody apart from christ can say i am leaving this earth since i have finished doing everything 🙂

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    • Thanks ..great to know that you’ve liked it… 🙂

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25. Maniparna i forgot to say one thing.Anybody can judge from your childhood photo you were really active.So i hope your son too.

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    • Haha..yes , he is… 🙂

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26. Superb !

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    • Thanks re.. 🙂

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27. A note unfinished and the melody too. Nice one Maniparna 🙂

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    • Thanks so much Vidyashree .. 🙂

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28. Loved the ‘note unfinished’ … you have made quite beautiful 🙂

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    • Thank you so much Kokila… 😀

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29. sounds of silence ❤

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    • Yes..they are more powerful than words… ❤ 🙂

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30. that was profound!

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    • Thank you… 🙂

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31. Very nice — the melody unfinished is a great metaphor for the life gone too soon.

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    • Thank you so much.. 🙂

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32. Light in darkness and words of silence in expression, is what makes magic in moments of life and I can see both in the beautiful picture and these few words…

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    • Aww..that’s so nice of you Nihar…thanks a lot for the appreciation… 🙂

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      • This was indeed lovely…my pleasure!!!

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33. there are always a few notes in spoken for…

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    • Yes..always..

      Thanks for dropping by… 🙂

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