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His consecration is to love
The woman who makes him fly
Like a leaf in the sky.
While she talks,
Exuberant bubbles of words
Swims happily in the air.
The deep abyss of her cleavage
Mysterious as ever
Her soft, shy gaze
Just made him feel
She is born
To kill.
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Beautiful!
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The last part of it is really interesting. Loved reading it.
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Oho ! Dying to get killed ! Ah! MEN … yes, it definitely has the viewpoint of a man… Kudos 🙂
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The killing beauty 😀
Nicely written
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Beautiful it just flowed in so naturally that even its lethal aspect was beautiful….
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Killer beauty then! Beware 🙂
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A beauty whose love kills?
Awesome lines
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Awesome…
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Wonderful words!
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Is she killing with love?
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O yes! Killing indeed 🙂
Good one.
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Dangerously lovable 😉
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Beautifully written Mani…the poetess! really liked it.
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“The woman who makes him fly
Like a leaf in the sky.”
Loved this expression.
A nice one
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Interesting description of femme fatale…
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Ouch… it hurts
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men have died by such gazes for generations…you’ve captured it succinctly.
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Lovely writing Maniparna! You did paint the enticing picture with your words:)
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Yes, that feeling men get when a person loves them back. Well written poem.
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She is some woman if she can slay the man ~ Good one ~
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Ha.. Men are easy to capture with the power of a cleavage…
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An intriguing read – love the opening and was surprised by the ending. Cool! I especially love “his consecration is to love the woman who makes him fly….”
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Sweet and spicy 😀 How nice! Well written.
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killer !! this poem! the dangerous beauty!
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haha.. she is born to kill.. love it 🙂
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Aaaahhh!!! I wasn’t expecting that ending. I like Susan’s comment about it.
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I’ve heard some men feel that way in front of an intelligent woman–watching her words lift in cartoon bubbles /aware only of the invitation of her cleavage much louder than shyness and love. This is a scary poem.
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heh, perhaps but for a moment….perhaps we will live a bit….
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Oh, that ending really took me by surprise! Cleverly crafted.
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Good one Maniparna !!
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ouch…a killer poem 🙂
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Having read it through a couple of times I could see that perhaps you have played with us and that an alternative meaning is there. Dangerous as she is, he may instead be the one to kill her!
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A beauty who is lovable and dangerous at the same time.
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Beauty… So powerful that it could crush you. I really enjoyed this.
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classical, elegant, powerful!
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Thanks so much… 🙂
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Poignant. Again like always a wonderful play of words 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂
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Anil is right.. She understand what cleavage and soft bubbles mean for a Man. So in reality, you must be a killer lady yourself.
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Glad you liked the poetry… 🙂 thank you…
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Loved the last line , very powerful ! 😀
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Thanks Shruti… 🙂
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Love it !
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Thanks .. 🙂
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Beautiful! It’s difficult for a lady to write from the viewpoint of a man, but you’ve done it so wonderfully!
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Thanks for your kind comment… 🙂
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