Nature has a music of its own, a hue soothing yet bright
Perceptible to those who can feel, drenched in the sight.
I wandered among the layers, of smoky clouds and mist
My lungs inflated with pure ecstasy, a perfect cosmic tryst.
Emeralds were there, so many shades of it
Chrysochlorous and azuline, Nature’s surreal gift.
Propitious sun rays dancing merrily on the cloud
Of heaven, I know not, but have seen that golden shroud.
When our hearts feel heavy, soul, broken and numb
Ameliorate the bitterness by Nature’s gleeful balm
Peace of Nature flowing into the soul
Making the part of you, one with the whole.
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Wow that’s beautiful. Nature has a way of healing your soul like nothing else in the world. Beautiful picture.
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True…Nature is always so beautiful and healing… 🙂
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I’m into it…. Great one didi 🙂
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I agree – and a lovely piece of Nature you chose to show us.
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absolutely beautiful pic and words 🙂
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Beautiful poem and picture. We call it Mother Nature for a reason. 🙂
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that is a super view 🙂
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This is a heaven view Maniparna…… So green and lively…. 🙂
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Thank you … 🙂
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“Ameliorate the bitterness by Nature’s gleeful balm
Peace of Nature flowing into the soul” – those lines just got me Maniparna…
I have always sought the Nature for my peace of mind …. You are an amazing poet.
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Thanks Vidhya…means a lot for me… 🙂
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The near rhymes or slanted rhymes often enhance the poem more than the perfect one in my book.. I think you have written a poem speaking of the true love of nature and what if can give if we let it do so.
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Thanks … I do think the same… 🙂 and really I feel this way with Nature… 🙂
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This is beautiful… where is it?
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Thanks and welcome to my blog-house 🙂 This is Khandala, Maharashtra…
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This looks so much like the Nilgiris :).. Such splendid beauty and personification with words. Coudlnt have asked for any better 🙂
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Thanks a lot Vinay… it’s actually Khandala… 🙂
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Beautiful words grafted together with nature’s respect.
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Thank you..nature automatically brings in that peace of mind… 🙂
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Wow… Nice pic and nice thoughts…
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Thanks Alok…
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So nicely written. Especially this line, “My lungs inflated with pure ecstasy, a perfect cosmic tryst.” That is just beautiful. 🙂
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Thanks… glad to know you like it… 🙂
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Beatiful poem and stunning pic.
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Thanks Kiran… 🙂
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What beautiful writing, words that you can breathe in and feel.
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Thanks…very well said… 🙂
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hey awsm pic and poem too….
keep posting dear
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Thank you… 🙂
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A beautiful poem with a beautiful pic… serene and ‘balmy’ … great Mani 🙂
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Thanks Kokila… 😀 it always feels nice getting compliments from friends… 🙂
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Nature is truly a ‘balm’, Mani.
how blessed are we 🙂
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Absolutely Anita… 🙂
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Very beautiful.
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Thanks 🙂 …
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Very well written and indeed a lovely pic.
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Thanks Indrani…
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“I wandered among the layers of smoky clouds and mist” just fascinating!!!!
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Thanks..really nice to know that you liked it…
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Lovely Maniparna 🙂 Retreat to Nature……
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Thanks Ruchi… nature is an inspiration..always.. 🙂
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This is very lovely, and the rhyming made it even more so.
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Thanks Sherry…your words mean a lot… 🙂
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Nature is certainly beautiful 🙂 But with your words the beauty has been enhanced so much more 🙂
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I agree so much..
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Thanks a lot… really so encouraging… 🙂
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Awesome poem Maniparna … really very colorful and great images painted with words.
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Thanks Kristjaan…your compliment means a lot… 🙂
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The lines had a very calming effect.
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Very beautiful!
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Beautiful lines ❤ ❤
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Thank you 🙂
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This is absolutely beautiful !
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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This is a beautiful poem. It gives me a sense of peacefulness to read. As for the rhyming mentioned above, many poems include words that are ‘near rhymes.’ That is a perfectly acceptable and long-honored practice! Your wording certainly works for me & fits the theme, which is MOST important in a poem anyway!
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Thank you so much…. for your profound words… 🙂
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Nature is our healing balm..your words express that so well…lovely, lovely poem Maniparna…
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I’ve always enjoyed natural settings, so filled with poetic inspiration and that is reflected well in your piece!!! Good job.
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Thanks ..same here… Nature is a great support… 🙂
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ah i often retreat to nature when i need a lift…for the music…and the peace that it brings…
just got back from a vacation in the mountains…
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you use such lovely words to set the scene of your lines.
numb and balm don’t rhyme in my ears, but bum, thumb, or jamaica rum wouldn’t fit in your story 🙂
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Thank you…. 🙂
You’re right ‘balm’ is accented as ” bä ” ..different from that of ‘numb’ …but thought it to be the most fitting according to the context… 🙂
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Serene and sublime….nicely put
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Thanks Chaitali… 🙂
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