I had a penchant for adopting the thoughts
The entangled ones.
The letters rearranged themselves
To make sense of those words
Untold , unuttered.
My desire to see the lines
In alignment with my vibes
How I wish to consort
With my dreams …be it
Reverie or nightmare.
The words enmeshed themselves
With my unseen dreams .
I waited , to see them born
Out of ashes , like a phoenix
And…..poetry was formed .
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your penchant for poetry is great…it’s a delight to read your work
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The desire to see the lines aligned with vibes did happen ! Lovely creation
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Very beautiful lines, you have worded it well and I love the pic.
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Great, Maniparna Jee
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Amazing ! loved it 🙂 keep us amsued Good wishes
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“I waited , to see them born
Out of ashes , like a phoenix
And…..poetry was formed .” superb 🙂
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With my unseen dreams .
I waited , to see them born
Out of ashes , like a phoenix
And…..poetry was formed . Brilliant words Maniparna and beautifully expressed. 😀
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One of the Most Beautiful Poems Ever Written
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beautiful manipurna..that’s how poetry is born..:)
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Dreams…As if it were pheonix …Lovely
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I love the choice of words Maniparna. They have got a certain essence to it 🙂
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Beautiful. I like it.
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“Out of ashes , like a phoenix
And…..poetry was formed ..”
A beautiful poem Maniparna !
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My desire to see the lines
In alignment with my vibes
How I wish to consort
With my dreams …be it
Reverie or nightmare. oh how beautiful line 🙂
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Thats a lovely picture , even lovelier is the poem 🙂
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Wonderfully expressed
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You can write poetry about poetry! 😀
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😀 😀
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I loved how this wrapped to its close! Beautiful!
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Okay playing with Gulgul is fun but distracting, hard to pull myself away, hee hee. Loved the poem, especially “And…poetry was formed.”
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Really inspirational poem! So joyful so beautiful!
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Well said! …and I love Gulgul ❤ 🙂
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“How I wish to consort with my dreams”…I love that line. I love your words! Beautiful poem.
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I love how you describe the untangling you do. Splendid.
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Yes, that is how poetry is formed! I like the idea of letters rearranging themselves. Sometimes it seems that way, doesn’t it? They find just the right way to align to form the message in words!
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out of the chaos of creation….of words and thoughts….poetry is born…ha….yes, just like that…creation….or as with the phoenix, recreation….
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Sometimes, like sausage making, only the end product should be seen.
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unmuttered
is what caught my eye here. Such a well0chosen word with layers of meaning. Nicely crafted poem.
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creation is magical indeed…
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KHUB BHALO..MANIPURNA…TOMAR LEKHA KHUB SUNDAR…
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and as the phoenix always rises .. os does this poem.. 🙂 beautiful
that is a lovely color of flower
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