She wept holding me close to her bosom.
Silently I drank the sweet-salty tears from her cheeks.
Another day….
She was sleeping …
I could see the deep delicious abyss of her cleavage …….
…and today …
She threw me on the floor saying …
” I want a new cushion !! ”
Heartbroken … I lay still.
Shared with DailyPost WordPress Writing Challenge : Fifty Word Inspiration
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Hehehe… You gave feelings to the cushion 😛 Good one Maniparna 🙂
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😀 Thank you Jyotsna…
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I love the two layers to your story, sad and funny in the same breath. I enjoyed your post.
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HI Ma’am
Fantastically written , and was superb at the end….. hahah
Thanks for sharing and thanks for visiting my blog
Have a great day ahead
Regards
Bhavikk shah
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Thank you… you’ve great blog..I usually read your posts..This time the article was about the scrip which I’m holding so couldn’t resist to comment… 😀 You’ve a great blog…
Nice to see you here ..welcome… 🙂
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That was awesome gal 😀
I wasn’t expecting the twist.. I’m sure no one here was..jilted lover, dead lover…sab soch liya tha in a few seconds…too good darling 😀
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😀 😀 itna kuchh soch liya 😛 thanks a lot .. happy to see you after so many days …..
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Feeling wala cushion !!! :)))
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:-D..haan Indrni like ishq wala love 😀
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Nice twist in the end…the beginning I thought of baby 🙂
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:-P.. thanks
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That’s really wonderful, personification is an art and you have mastered this art 🙂 😀
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Thank a lot… 😀
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Good one.
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nice story Maniparna… 🙂
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Aww…even cushions have feelings!
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Yes..sometimes they have…. we shouldn’t underestimate them.. 😀
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i think it was really good.
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Thank you ..hope you’ve enjoyed reading it… 🙂
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Your first mini fiction is very successful; conveys much in the few words.
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Thanks a lot Sir… 🙂
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maniparna i needed a break from blogging for two three days.when you get time check my new 2 poems and one haiku today night ok?
i started reading this casually,
but my mind said lets go slowly,
then this poem touched me deeply.
i know cushion was only a metaphor you used 🙂
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Will check them out for sure..
Writers are there to write ..imagination lies in the mind of the reader …if a write-up succeeds in evoking myriad images in the reader’s mind…I think that’s a success 🙂 Thank you so much for the comment…
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maniparna the only reason i stayed from making more friendship with you was because you are too good in everything you writes.i also thought may be you live in a big city and all so things a village guy like me writes you may not like.the day i saw the reviews on shampu ,mobile etc.i had this doubt.are you working in a business field?where is your place?have you heard anything on kerala?sorry i know bloggers should not share such things.i just asked.that is all.
also i can see you in almost all blogs.that is something incredible.and only because of you i wrote some haikus.i won’t forget that.have a great day and god bless.
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Firstly let me tell you..that writers’ recognition comes solely from their works…where and how they live their life do not matter 🙂 So never think that someone would fail to or could restrain himself to give recognition to your creativity because of the fact that you’re a small town guy.
I live in Kolkata , West Bengal . Yes , I’ve visited Kerala twice..it’s a beautiful state… God’s own country as the tourism tagline goes 🙂
Why don’t you write about your own village and state ? It would be amazing to know about your place….and include some photographs as well . Onam is approaching ..I think it happens on August ..isn’t it ? do write about it… 🙂
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Aww…poor cushion! Who would have thought it was cushion?..sounded like someone’s beloved!
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Thanks ..hehe..that was the intention actually… 😛
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Aww…poor cushion! Who would have thought it was a cushion?…sounded like someone’s beloved 🙂
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That was refreshing 😀
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thank you 🙂
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That’s a good one, Mani 🙂 Who knew?
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Thanks Beloo.. 😛
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🙂 Magic wand of thoughts gave life to pillows 🙂 Nice one…
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Pillows are full of emotions..you never know… 😛
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Got to know a few via your post 🙂 Hee hee…
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That was a nice one!
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Thanks Mridula..
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You are turning out to be a good romance novelist now…
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Haha.. you’re too kind with your words… 😀 thanks a lot…
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HE he he he 😀 … A story in 50 words! Now thats a challenge 🙂
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Yep..challenge …literally… 😀
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