60 responses to “Haiku : Breeze”

1. wheat fields remind me of gladiator, but very well written nonetheless.

   Cheers!

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2. Reblogged this on Sherin Skaria and commented:
   The haiku which made me remain speechless.

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3. Reblogged this on iKu2e.

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5. Your Haiku reeked in happiness but Gulgul was distracting me constantly 😛

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   • Thanks Ritesh…. Gulgul had a happy time with you 😀

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6. You are a master in this…Always you create beautiful Haiku…

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   • Thank you so much for this compliment Jayanta.. 🙂

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7. Your compilations are always stunning!!

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8. 2nd is really beautiful, reminds me of my village and farm.

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9. with the help of a friend after some editing i think i finally wrote one.
   http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/12/haiku/

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10. Nice.

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11. The imagery of the wheat fields is stunning here.. really lovely.

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    • Thanks a lot … it’s quite common ….especially in our countryside… 🙂 nice to know you liked the imagery.. 🙂

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12. Lovely Haiku sweety! 🙂

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    • Thanks Bushra… 🙂

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13. beautiful 🙂

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    • Thanks Sachin..nice to see you here… 🙂

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14. Lovely words, Mani! I love the breeze in your post 🙂

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    • Thanks Anita… compliments are like breeze too.. they make me happy… 🙂

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15. Melody of words too! Lovely.

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    • Thanks Mridula.. 🙂

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16. Any breeze that can revive a long-lost love is a special breeze indeed!

    No Breeze This Morning

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    • Really..well said..thanks for commenting… 🙂

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17. I read earlier but was bit tired so did not comment – the soft sounds and imagery are so soothing in your haiku, as well as the way the first points to the innocent days of the past. I remember walking along paths with a wonderful girl or two years ago, and sometimes wish I’d kept in touch, just to know they are well…”sigh”….

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    • Oh..I can understand ..sometimes the memory becomes heavy ….yet we love to cherish them for they remain as some of the best moments of our lives …

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      • PS – really, this is an unforgetable haiku of yours Kristjaan used on his post. http://chevrefeuilleshaikushuukan.blogspot.fi/2014/06/haiku-shuukan-9-idyllic.html

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    • Thanks for the link…. 🙂

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18. The Haiku does complete justice to this calm, serene scene…

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    • Nice to know that liked them… 🙂 thank you..

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19. Both are delicate and pretty!

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    • Thanks so much Amitji..

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20. Beautiful lines 🙂 It’s just hot-hot breeze here in Delhi 😦

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    • Thanks ..and yes..here in Kolkata also… extreme humidity 😦 gheme-neye gelaam…

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      • It was 48 degrees here in Delhi…can you believe that ? We are literally baked. Ar gham-o baaki nai 😉 🙂

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21. Awesome but the picture didn’t open up :(((

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    • Oh..so sorry..Wordpress sometimes behaves in a weird manner.. 😦

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22. Lovely Lines Maniparna …..

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    • glad you liked it..thanks 🙂

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23. Awesome!!!

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    • Thank you ..

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24. Awesome Haiku 🙂 So positive 🙂

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    • Thanks Deepa 🙂

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25. Uplifting positive haikus

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    • Thanks Deepak… 🙂

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26. Hello,Great Blog You have,my best regards,EM
    http://emeraldwake.wordpress.com/

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    • Thank you…really elated to know that you liked my blog 🙂

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27. This was wonderful. I loved the contrast between the two stanzas and the wonderful use of colors too!

    First time here, loving it! 🙂

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    • Thank you so much Soumya …. a warm welcome to you..on my blog 🙂

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28. Another gem of a poem from you.haiku means?a poem of fewer lines like my dancing in rain poem?

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    • Thanks 🙂 actually “haiku” is a traditional Japanese poetic form consisting of 3 lines and 17 syllables in the form 5-7-5 ..i,e the first line has 5 syllables followed by second with 7 and the last with 5…there are some other criteria also….you can check it out here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku it’s an interesting poetic form and I’m an ardent fan of it 😀

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      • tried something similar today cannot be called a haiku but,
        http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/11/i-stared-at/

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29. So beautiful!!! I love this poem! 🙂

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    • Thanks Line..so sweet of you.. 🙂

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30. second haiku wow 🙂

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    • Thanks Ankur 🙂

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31. Awesome set Maniparna … but your second haiku is a rough diamond greatly composed haiku … thank you for sharing.

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    • Thanks a lot Chèvrefeuille….glad you liked it… 🙂

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      • My pleasure … every haiku gives me joy …

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      • Haiku is a great source of happiness for me too… 🙂

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