light , cool summer breeze
a forgotten afternoon
long lost love , revived
vast golden wheat fields
nodding heads with breeze
melody of life
Shared with Carpe Diem Haiku Kai where the prompt was ” breeze “
Shared with Carpe Diem Haiku Kai where the prompt was ” breeze “
wheat fields remind me of gladiator, but very well written nonetheless.
Cheers!
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Reblogged this on Sherin Skaria and commented:
The haiku which made me remain speechless.
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Reblogged this on iKu2e.
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Your Haiku reeked in happiness but Gulgul was distracting me constantly 😛
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Thanks Ritesh…. Gulgul had a happy time with you 😀
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You are a master in this…Always you create beautiful Haiku…
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Thank you so much for this compliment Jayanta.. 🙂
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Your compilations are always stunning!!
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2nd is really beautiful, reminds me of my village and farm.
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with the help of a friend after some editing i think i finally wrote one.
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/12/haiku/
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Nice.
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The imagery of the wheat fields is stunning here.. really lovely.
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Thanks a lot … it’s quite common ….especially in our countryside… 🙂 nice to know you liked the imagery.. 🙂
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Lovely Haiku sweety! 🙂
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Thanks Bushra… 🙂
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beautiful 🙂
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Thanks Sachin..nice to see you here… 🙂
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Lovely words, Mani! I love the breeze in your post 🙂
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Thanks Anita… compliments are like breeze too.. they make me happy… 🙂
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Melody of words too! Lovely.
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Thanks Mridula.. 🙂
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Any breeze that can revive a long-lost love is a special breeze indeed!
No Breeze This Morning
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Really..well said..thanks for commenting… 🙂
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I read earlier but was bit tired so did not comment – the soft sounds and imagery are so soothing in your haiku, as well as the way the first points to the innocent days of the past. I remember walking along paths with a wonderful girl or two years ago, and sometimes wish I’d kept in touch, just to know they are well…”sigh”….
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Oh..I can understand ..sometimes the memory becomes heavy ….yet we love to cherish them for they remain as some of the best moments of our lives …
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PS – really, this is an unforgetable haiku of yours Kristjaan used on his post. http://chevrefeuilleshaikushuukan.blogspot.fi/2014/06/haiku-shuukan-9-idyllic.html
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Thanks for the link…. 🙂
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The Haiku does complete justice to this calm, serene scene…
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Nice to know that liked them… 🙂 thank you..
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Both are delicate and pretty!
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Thanks so much Amitji..
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Beautiful lines 🙂 It’s just hot-hot breeze here in Delhi 😦
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Thanks ..and yes..here in Kolkata also… extreme humidity 😦 gheme-neye gelaam…
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It was 48 degrees here in Delhi…can you believe that ? We are literally baked. Ar gham-o baaki nai 😉 🙂
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Awesome but the picture didn’t open up :(((
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Oh..so sorry..Wordpress sometimes behaves in a weird manner.. 😦
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Lovely Lines Maniparna …..
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glad you liked it..thanks 🙂
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Awesome!!!
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Thank you ..
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Awesome Haiku 🙂 So positive 🙂
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Thanks Deepa 🙂
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Uplifting positive haikus
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Thanks Deepak… 🙂
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Hello,Great Blog You have,my best regards,EM
http://emeraldwake.wordpress.com/
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Thank you…really elated to know that you liked my blog 🙂
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This was wonderful. I loved the contrast between the two stanzas and the wonderful use of colors too!
First time here, loving it! 🙂
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Thank you so much Soumya …. a warm welcome to you..on my blog 🙂
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Another gem of a poem from you.haiku means?a poem of fewer lines like my dancing in rain poem?
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Thanks 🙂 actually “haiku” is a traditional Japanese poetic form consisting of 3 lines and 17 syllables in the form 5-7-5 ..i,e the first line has 5 syllables followed by second with 7 and the last with 5…there are some other criteria also….you can check it out here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku it’s an interesting poetic form and I’m an ardent fan of it 😀
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tried something similar today cannot be called a haiku but,
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/11/i-stared-at/
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So beautiful!!! I love this poem! 🙂
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Thanks Line..so sweet of you.. 🙂
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second haiku wow 🙂
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Thanks Ankur 🙂
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Awesome set Maniparna … but your second haiku is a rough diamond greatly composed haiku … thank you for sharing.
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Thanks a lot Chèvrefeuille….glad you liked it… 🙂
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My pleasure … every haiku gives me joy …
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Haiku is a great source of happiness for me too… 🙂
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