My first thought: ”Goodness!” everytime I see a classic my true appreciation of the art of haiku is renewed. And I do really get momentarily stunned. Of course for a second I think ‘when, when will I do that, reach that level!’ but that thought goes away again. I thought the haiku was stunning enough, till I saw the word ‘fleeting’, and matched it to butterfly and rainbow, and knew I had read a rare haiku that can make me think all day. A very balanced one for the tongue too, with the p/b/s sounds drifting nicely. Really well done and presented.
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the flowers stand out 🙂
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Very lovely.
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Happiness is the silver line in the black cloud 🙂
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where is this place..awesome click
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Wonderful ! Its so refreshing for the mind.
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Wonderful! It is so refreshing for the mind.
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this is beautiful 🙂
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Beautiful lilies and words that make me think! 🙂
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Thanks Dilip for your kind comment 🙂
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Hihi, this made me laugh, I mean laugh out of sweetness! 🙂 How wonderful! 🙂
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:-D..glad to know that you liked it Line and that it made you smile…
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My first thought: ”Goodness!” everytime I see a classic my true appreciation of the art of haiku is renewed. And I do really get momentarily stunned. Of course for a second I think ‘when, when will I do that, reach that level!’ but that thought goes away again. I thought the haiku was stunning enough, till I saw the word ‘fleeting’, and matched it to butterfly and rainbow, and knew I had read a rare haiku that can make me think all day. A very balanced one for the tongue too, with the p/b/s sounds drifting nicely. Really well done and presented.
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Thank you so much. What a compliment ! I’m in seventh heaven 😛
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Wonderful!!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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This is awesome. I can visualize the picture you tried to create using your words. It makes sense along with being beautiful. 🙂
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Thanks dear…. great compliment 🙂
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