Snowflakes whispered on the window pane
I watched and watched with beaming eyes
Water droplets converted to crystals
As a steaming mug warmed my fingers.
I spent the day with waves tickling my feet
Sand caressed my knees softly
Melody of leisure ameliorated
The nitty-gritty of methodical mundane life.
The ethereal cerulean layer melted with the setting sun
I watched and watched with beaming eyes
Nowhere to reach, I stopped the time
Holidaying with myself, sublime.
Shared with Poets United Mid-week Motif ~~ Holy Days and Holidays
“Nowhere to reach, I stopped the time
Holidaying with myself, sublime”.
These lines could be told only by a Good Poet and that You are.
Of the so very few good poems I have read are yours also.
Shiva
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That’s a huge compliment and you just made my day… 🙂
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Good Blog!
But this particular Post I could not read as it is in Yellow color.
You may please change the color of the fonts I do not know how the others have read it.
Please do not mistake me.
Shiva
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Absolutely not Mr. Shiva 🙂
Actually, previously the background colour of my blog was deep purple. So, the colour yellow looked bright as the font colour. I’ve changed the WP theme recently, but it was not possible to change the font colour of all the previous posts. hence, the problem 🙂
Thanks for reminding me of this one in particular. I’ve changed the font colour just now. Kindly share your views about the poem..:-)
And, finally, welcome to my blog…:-)
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OK , I as well thought about that.
I shall just read it now.
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🙂
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Lovely clicks
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Oh such a beautiful flow of thoughts which captures so well the mood and ambiance of the seaside!
Thanks Maniparna and cheers 🙂
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You’re so welcome.. 🙂 thanks for the kind words of appreciation 🙂
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Awesome.
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Exactly the kind of holiday(not one but many) I would like to have. Thanks for this ‘flake’.
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Welcome to my blog Sujith..:-) really such a holiday is everyone’s dream..
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Lovely words for a lovely picture and occasion.
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Thanks Mridula..
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Sea has a special attraction for me. The poem captures the mood well.
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Thanks a lot …
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Well written…enjoyed the spirit of your words!
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Nice to know that…thank you 🙂
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Very impressive.Which place is this?
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Thanks Ankita , this a view from Kolaba Fort , Maharshtra…
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I perfect holiday! I prefer green places over crowded ones. That’s brings peace to me and this way I ‘Holiday with myself’. 🙂
This poem speaks so well about what a perfect holiday can be like.
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Right Namrata , a perfect holiday is where I can spend some time with myself.. where I can do what I like.. and where I don’t need to run after the time 🙂
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This is something one wishes for all the time but seldom gets an opportunity…..
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Yes..right you’re.. I really enjoyed my latest trip..a vacation I enjoyed at the fullest 🙂
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Superb write! 🙂
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🙂 thanks
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Those lines written so well for the pic.
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Thanks Indrani 🙂
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so lovely 🙂
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Thanks Ankur 🙂
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So lovely , the image and the poem
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I love those beaming eyes..can see them in your lovely picture too!
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Aww..Thank you so much Jae 🙂
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Its too good Maniparna. Keep writing, you have a line of popularity…
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Thanks 🙂 your appreciation means a lot 🙂
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Beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Awesome click!!! Loved the serene pic ❤
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Thanks Sri.. love you ❤
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enjoyed. this read was an ameliorative moment from the mundane.
gracias
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Loved your appreciation.. thank you 🙂
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So beautiful and dreamy! 🙂
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Thanks Line..this is the photograph of a place near Mumbai..recently visited and I enjoyed its serene beauty..:-)
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thank you Maniparna for offering such peaceful moments…
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Thank Sumanadi…..glad you liked it 🙂
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Hi, I’m visiting from Poets United. I wish I was there! Love the poem. Nice take on the prompt.
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So nice of you …holidays are always enjoyable…thanks for the visit 🙂
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Wonderful pic and the lines have so nicely complimented it .
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ah ha..thanks a lot..
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Ha ha, I got playing with the pup over on the right and had to tear myself away to read your poem! My favorite kind of holiday – spent in peaceful solitude! Loved it.
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:-D.. haha ..feeling sorry for the pup..and feeling happy as well for your appreciation 🙂
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Amen to that!. I love your images, tactile and otherwise.
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Thank you so much Susan.. 🙂
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