Living has become a penchant for most Mere existence and then Oblivion.
Love for life is still we rear Small happiness To watch cherry blossoms Or dancing in a desultory fashion Under the rain-drops Bucolic calmness Thirsty soul drinks the beauty.
Dwelling with the beauty of life The depth matters , not the length.
Your poem reveals deep philosophy in you, but you wrote your points with such feeling and fragility, the cherry blossoms under the rain drops. I agree with the small happiness. From a male angle I see a lust for accomplishment, be it climbing a difficult mountain to see the view or other, but one can have that and feel for the cherry blossom too, I think. Very interesting words, always worth coming to your blog!
Deep thoughts here, Mani. Agree that the depth or quality of life matters more…yet people wanna live long!
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The depth matters.. I agree!!
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Thank you.. 🙂
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Perfect play of words to a wonderful thought…
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Thanks a lot..glad you liked it 🙂
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So true! Beautifully penned.
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Thanks ..and welcome to my blog 🙂
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Lovely writing Maniparna:)
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Thanks for the appreciation Rahul 🙂
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The truth! Very well said Maniparna.
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Thanks Indrani… 🙂
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Well said! even a single min of enjoying life deeply is worth it.
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Absolutely Uma , it matters how we are spending the precious time….
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This one is superb 🙂
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Thanks Ankur 🙂
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Superb one Maniparna! 🙂 Loved the last one…most meaningful…! Life just passes so fast…how many live deep lives….
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Thanks Amrita… 🙂
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Mere existence or a life well lived….Wonderfully written Maniparna 🙂
Random Thoughts Naba
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Thanks Nabanita.. glad you liked it.. 🙂
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The depth matters… agree with you whole-heartedly.
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Thanks Sir.. 🙂
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The depth matters and not the length. I loved this line. This was philosophical, great lessons can be derived through it.
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Thanks for your appreciation 🙂 …
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it has so much of depth …..lovely poem 🙂
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a philosophical as well as an emotional way to symbolise the life, i must say. A “writer’s write up” indeed…
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Nice one
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Your poem reveals deep philosophy in you, but you wrote your points with such feeling and fragility, the cherry blossoms under the rain drops. I agree with the small happiness. From a male angle I see a lust for accomplishment, be it climbing a difficult mountain to see the view or other, but one can have that and feel for the cherry blossom too, I think. Very interesting words, always worth coming to your blog!
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This is so true!!
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