The passion in your eyes , the ambrosial touch
Of your lips , acute and intense,
Being loved is such a bliss.
A million roses in my heart, I savor the smell of love
Breathless I become as I feel
Symphony in your touch.
My senses are all conjured up by your amorous words
Words,appear as rainbows in my sky
Warmth of desire making me shy.
The ‘too often profaned’ word has ultimate power
To stir one’s soul, to make one feel
Heaven’s just here on my windowsill.
~~This being a gift for my dear husband as we’re celebrating our anniversary today~~
Shared with “Poetry Pantry” at Poets United
to express LOVE in words is not that easy, though people may find it.. and you have done it with much affection… beautifullll
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This is beautiful – perfect and true to your real potential.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Eirokom lekho – tomar ek ekta lekha ekebare onno level e chole jay. Ar blog take ektu redesign koro.
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ki bhabe redesign korbo ? 😦 esob byapare aami ekdawm iye jaake bole.. 😦
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Ami kore debo?
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Thanks for the offer.. suggestions daao..wait ..aami ekTu sompy pele tomaake FB te ping korbo..koyekTa jinish aami really change korte chaai..
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Lovely poem, Maniparna. What a great way to commemorate your Anniversary! Best wishes to the charming couple 🙂 Wish you much happiness!
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Thank you Anita for the lovely wish 🙂
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May this renewal continue through all your years!
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Thanks Susan 🙂
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The Rose metaphor is great.
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Thank you..glad that you liked it 🙂
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Its good for eyes and rest for souls. Signs of Wonderful. Long live.
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Thank you..
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Really Nice 🙂 Happy Anniversary .. Have a Great Day 🙂
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Thanks a lot Bhawya 🙂
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Happy anniversary Maniparna….lovely to read the beautiful words 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A very happy anniversary to both of you!
Nice lines for the occasion.
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Thanks dear 🙂
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Happy Anniversary!! Lovely poem 🙂
Aditya Manchanda
http://www.eatoutsdelhi.net
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Thanks Aditya..
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Happy Anniversary !!
The first thing that hit my head as i finished reading this post of urs was why doesn’t my wife express like this…
Its so good.
Wishes to both of you.:-)
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Haha..Inspire your wife to start a blog and I’m sure she would express her feelings in the same way 🙂
Thanks for the wish 🙂
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Happy Anniversary.. a belated one 🙂
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Thanks Namrota.. 🙂
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happy anniversary…its a wonderful love poem…and to what love can do to us when we let it…smiles….hope you two enjoyed the day…
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Thanks a lot Brian..yes we did enjoy the day 🙂
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Happy anniversary! It is lovely to read the words of a happily married young woman. Does my old heart good!
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Thanks Sherry 🙂
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