Haiku : Words January 17, 2014 · by Maniparna Sengupta Majumder · in Haiku. · Words , sharp as a knife Quick as a whip cracked upon Raw stings kissed the heart . Inspired by the theme at Share if you like itTweetTelegramWhatsAppMoreLike Loading... Related
It’s all about words…indeed…Thanks..great message here.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/01/earth-takes-sharp-turn-haiku.html RS LikeLike
Words are powerful but can be corrupted and are certainly no indication of the truth. Actions speak louder than words. LikeLike
Right you are. But words left deep scars when used harshly and can do magic when they are sweet and sobre..Isn’t it ? LikeLike
Raw stings, the most powerful imagery I’ve come across lately. But, as you know, ‘words’ being compared to a whip is common. The real deal was to bring out the image of reddened flesh and burning stings, which you did. LikeLike
Words can be so cruel sometimes.. I just tried to bring out that.. Thanks for the nice comment 🙂 LikeLike
I love your haiku topic… the powerful words… and of course your composition is perfect as usual 🙂 LikeLike
Words can indeed be lethal and hurt, more than we usually imagine. I like the image of the whip. LikeLike
The first two of course we know. But he last bit, raw stings this one is coined so well! Richa LikeLike
really sharp !
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Thank you 🙂
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quick as a whip– fantastic image
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Thank you so much 🙂
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It’s all about words…indeed…Thanks..great message here..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/01/earth-takes-sharp-turn-haiku.html
RS
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Thanks for stopping by ..:-)
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Wow…beautiful 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Words are powerful but can be corrupted and are certainly no indication of the truth. Actions speak louder than words.
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Right you are. But words left deep scars when used harshly and can do magic when they are sweet and sobre..Isn’t it ?
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Lovely. Words can be sharper than the sharpest rapier.
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Yes..and simultaneously.. words can do magic ..
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Raw stings, the most powerful imagery I’ve come across lately. But, as you know, ‘words’ being compared to a whip is common. The real deal was to bring out the image of reddened flesh and burning stings, which you did.
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Words can be so cruel sometimes.. I just tried to bring out that..
Thanks for the nice comment 🙂
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I love your haiku topic… the powerful words… and of course your composition is perfect as usual 🙂
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Its true. words are powerful.
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Like it is said: Pen is mightier than sword and tongue even sharper.
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yes ..so true ..
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Words can indeed be lethal and hurt, more than we usually imagine. I like the image of the whip.
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Thank you Gabriella . glad that you liked it 🙂
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How true!
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Words are like magic ..isn’t it ?
Nice to know that you think in the same way 🙂
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Very true. Nice 🙂
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Thank you Deepa 🙂
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The first two of course we know. But he last bit, raw stings this one is coined so well!
Richa
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Glad that you liked it..thanks a lot 🙂
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Words have enormous power . They are our real life magic, be it white or black !
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Very well said 🙂
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