Haiku : Words



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12.02.16 words are powerfulWords , sharp as a knife

Quick as a whip cracked upon

Raw stings kissed the heart .

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28 responses to “Haiku : Words

  1. Raw stings, the most powerful imagery I’ve come across lately. But, as you know, ‘words’ being compared to a whip is common. The real deal was to bring out the image of reddened flesh and burning stings, which you did.

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