Symphony of words was woven
The sunshine of heart was warm
The cacophony of crowd was still
One glance of your eyes, I knew,could kill.
The turbulent waves kissing the shore, went silent
Untimely spring was writing an ode
To one for whom the red carpet was there
A never-ending wait, the distance a million light-year.
Written on the prompt PU : Mid-week motif ~~ newness
Scattered Thoughts 
Nicely crafted. Very good one Maniparna.
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Lovely Maniparna. Though I cannot write poetry I can appreciate one when I see it. Thank you for visiting my site.
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Beautiful, this can have so many meanings … waiting for spring or love to bloom 🙂
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This is very well expressed and beautifully crafted. I really enjoyed the idea of spring writing an ode. Nice meeting you here at Poets United, and hope to see you on Sunday for ‘open link’ again!
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Thanks a lot..glad that you liked it 🙂 Nice to meet you too 🙂
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Ooohh.. beautiful is the only word I could think of. 🙂
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Thanks dear 🙂
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Waiting can be so turbulent that an inner feeling-fall flows in a poetry named “waiting”!Very appealing.
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Thanks for dropping by 🙂 and for the kind comment ..
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Good one Maniparna, keep writing, you do it well. 🙂
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Thank you so much Indrani 😀
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there is a sense of renewed promises here! so much welcome 🙂
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Symphony of words was woven – this line just draws you in and opens up this poem. Great line and wonderfully crafted. Well done.
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Thank you 🙂
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Neat presence of a winter figure whose eyes accuse the early spring. Very timely for Northern USA and Canada.
I couldn’t find an email to send this to: Maniparna Sengupta Majumder (should I just use the first name?) This is the second poem you posted at Poets United today, though we usually take only one a week. I will make that clearer on our site. Will you kindly link this poem back to us? Thank you, and thank you for your comments. BTW, my name is Susan, not Alice, though I am a huge fan of Alice in Wonderland.
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Sorry for posting the first link wrongly. My internet is working very slow and I’m seeing this ” Aww Snap” so many times 😦 . I posted the first link that is # 28 wrongly and I have already clarified it in the comments section . Please remove the #28 link if you can.
And I know you’re Susan..I know it well . I just wanted to appreciate the use of the rabbit-hole as it was in Alice In Wonderland. Can’t understand why only half of the comment got published making it hilarious and meaningless. 😦
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Well, now I feel silly! I should have picked up on the Alice compliment. I’m so Sorry! Let’s leave it as is there. Feel free to erase all my comments if you wish. And thank you for joining us at Poets United.
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Waiting can be thrilling or hard, depending on the circumstances. “Untimely spring was writing an ode” – beautiful line!
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Thank you 🙂
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